2023温州三模读后续写：个人成长类---一节游泳课 (1) 讲义-2023届高三英语二轮复习写作专项

23年5月温州三模读后续写精讲 原文阅读与分析 Oh no. Coach Cafferty just said my name. for the event. The two-hundred-meter breaststroke (蛙) for the coming meet! Not the backstroke (f) had wished and practiced for so long! Beads of sweat popped out over my upper lip. Morgan pressed her elbow into my side, trying to offer memorial support. But it didn't help. My stomach sank to my knees like a brick in water. Morgan tried to convince me it would be fine. “Maybe Coach has more confidence in you than you think” “Or maybe Coach Caffery just wants to give the rest a laugh when I sink into the bottom of the pool I thought desperately. I walked towards Coach Cafferty and told her about my inability and my sire to quit this event. She frowned and asked if it was what I really wanted. I hesitated. Placing her hand on my shoulder, she started smiling and encouraged me to push myself outside of my comfort zone. Task 1: Please fill in the blanks according to the two paragraphs 1 . Main plots “我”突然被教练告知要参加 200 米蛙泳比赛，而不是练习了很久的仰泳。“我”很沮丧和灰心，于是 找教练商量，教练鼓励“我”要跳出自己的舒适圈 2.Main characters: “I, my friend Morgan, my coach Cafferty 3. Time & Place: Before the event 4.整理这两段中描写“我”的情绪的表达，并总结 “我”的性格特点: Beads of sweat popped out over my upper lip. / My stomach sank to my knees like a brick in water.maybe Coach Caffery just wants to give the rest a laugh when I sink into the bottom of the pool.” I thought desperately.“我”非常不自信、有些胆小 The first practice was a disaster. I lost rhythm ( 节奏) on my strokes. I messed up my turns. I even had to stop and catch my breath a few times. I felt everyone was laughing at me and my stomach twisted. How could make it within the two weeks? But once I dragged myself out of the water, exhausted and frustrated, Coach Cafferty thumbed up to me, saying I did really well and just needed more confidence in myself and more time to practice. On the way back home, Morgan comforted me, “Dear, just ignore others. Race against yourself. Count your own strokes. Prove to yourself that you can do it.W