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昆明市2023届第二次市统考读后续写解析
一、续写原文:
It was a long weekend in May 2018 and my fiend, Gabe Rosescu, and I were taking a road trip from my home in the city of Weyburn to visit fiends in Nelson, British Columbia. We are both adventurous, and we couldn't wait to go hiking and exploring. It was our first trip together since we knew each other.
At around 10:30 am on Thursday, May 17, we were driving about 1I miles west of Creston, on a steep mountain road known as the Crowsnest Highway. I was texting updates to my family and enjoying the view. We weren't aware there'd recently been flooding in the area.
When I looked up from my phone, I saw a wave of mud and an enormous tree rolling down the mountain, right in front of Gabe's car. He tried to stop the car, but it was too late.
I looked at Gabe and we both were in great panic. The mudslide sent our car falling nearly 300 meters down a rocky cliff. It landed on its side among some trees.
I don't know how long we were unconscious (失去知觉的), but I woke up to Gabe's voice with pain. He was slumped (瘫倒) over the steering wheel, and there was blood everywhere. Outside my passenger window there was a steep drop.
Every time I moved, I was hit with violent chest pain. I had broken my sternum, and my right ankle was broken and practically turned backward. Gabe had broken his orbital bone, and nasal and cheek bones. His head was badly hurt and his vision was damaged. But the body is an amazing thing, and somehow we were both able to crawl out of that car.
I was so focused on our survival that I didn't notice how seriously the car was damaged or where we were. We had no phone signal, so all we could think to do was yell for help. But mychest hurt too much to even breathe. So Gabe started shouting as loud as he could.
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We were shocked when we heard someone call back after just a few minutes.
Fortunately, we were slowly recovering under the care of the medical staff.
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文本大意:作者和朋友Gabe一起进