内容正文:
专题09:话题作文-2023年中考英语作文考前强化特训
1.世间万物总是随着周围的环境的不同或自身的原因而不断地发生着改变。这些改变各不相同,有良性的,也有恶性的。请根据下面的内容提示,以“...Has Changed a Lot”为题写一篇短文介绍一下某人或者某物所发生的变化。
内容提示:
1. What did he/she/it used to be like?
2. What happened to him/her/it?
作文要求:
1.不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯,词数80个左右。
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【答案】例文
My Friend Has Changed a Lot
My friend Celia has changed a lot. She was never interested in sports before, so she didn’t do many sports. She was keen on things like watching TV, listening to music and sleeping. In the P.E. class, other girls all did better than her and she always felt quite embarrassed. But two years and a half ago, she started to change. The Basketball Union paid a visit to her school, and told them much about basketall. Celia was taught how to play basketball and she really enjoyed it. Now she does sports with the basketball group like running and gym work. She thinks she’ll do better than others.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为话题作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,首先补全题目,介绍是什么发生了很大的改变;
第二步,介绍他/她/它过去是什么样的;
第三步,最后介绍他/她/它发生了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②be keen on热衷于
③pay a visit拜访
[高分句型]
①other girls all did better than her and she always felt quite embarrassed.(and连接两个并列结构)
②She thinks she’ll do better than others.(省略that的宾语从句)
2.初中的学习生涯即将结束了。三年来,在你获取知识的同时,你的外貌,兴趣爱好,习惯……都有了一定的改变吧!请你以“How I’ve