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B5U5 First Aid - Writing WJX Step 1 审题 假设你是李华,你们班最近再英语课上学习了有关急救方面的一些常识,同学们普遍对这方面的知识很感兴趣,大家都认为学校有必要提供相关的课程。作为班长,请你给校长写一封信,提出你的建议,并写出建议的理由。内容包括: 1.学习急救知识的意义; 2.具体建议及原因; 3.重申建议的重要性。 文体、格式 写信者、写信对象 时态、人称、语言风格 Step 2 结构 Dear Principal, Para 1: background information + writing purpose Para 2: suggestion 1 + reason 1; suggestion 2 + reason 2; suggestion 3 + reason 3 Para 3: restatement + expectation Yours sincerely, Li Hua Step 3 语言 Para 1: background information ①Our class studied some knowledge about first aid. 被动 Recently, we have been given classes about first aid. Some classes about first aid have been given recently. Step 3 语言 Para 1: background information ②We are all interested in it and feel it important to learn more about first aid. 换词 引起我们的兴趣 arouse our interest in learning more about first aid 提升我们的意识 raise our awareness of the importance of first aid 增加细节 We are all interested in it and feel that being able to give first aid when needed can make a difference before proper medical treatment is given. 用新词 在紧急情况下 under emergency circumstances / in an emergency 实施急救 perform first aid properly 极为必要 be of great necessity Step 3 语言 Para 1: writing purpose Therefore, we’d like to give some suggestions. 注意写信者及收信者身份 Therefore, on behalf of our class, I’d like to give some suggestions on first aid education in our campus. Step 3 语言 Para 2: suggestions + reasons Courses Posters Leaflets Rescue drills 救援演练 Paramedics/professional first aid team Step 3 语言 Para 2: suggestions + reasons Courses 校园内有潜在的安全风险,开设急救课程极为紧急。 As there are potential risks in our campus, there is an urgent need for our school to give first aid courses. 换句式 It is urgent that our school (should) do It is of urgency that our school (should) do 换词 offer/set up/provide/establish Step 3 语言 Para 2: suggestions + reasons Posters / Leaflets Posters about first aid for different injuries should be put up in every corner of our campus. Leaflets about first aid for different injuries should be sent out to the ha