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暨实高级中学复习资料之书面表达 编制：高三英语组 书面表达之求助信答案 (2019·辽宁省六校协作体高三期初联考)假定你是李华，将参加学校举行的英文演讲比赛，已写好演讲稿。给教你英语口语一年并已回国一个月的外教Mr. Daniel写封邮件，请他帮你审核稿件并做出必要的修改。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 I. 审题(Review): 1. 体裁____________2.人称____________ 3.时态____________4. 要点____　　　　　　　　　　　 ___　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 ___　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 II. 参考句式 首段 1.自我介绍 ※ I’m Li Hua from your English writing class last term. ※ I’m Li Hua, a student from your writing class last term. ※ I am Li Hua, a student currently studying in your writing class. 2.背景介绍 ※ I’m applying for a part-time job at a foreign company during the summer vacation. ※ With the summer vacation around the corner, I intend to apply for a part-time job in a certain foreign company, which I believe will be a golden opportunity for my personal growth. ※ I have just completed my application letter and resume. ※ I have just completed my application letter and resume, which has been attached to this letter. 3. 写作目的 ※ I’m writing to seek your assistance. ※ I’m writing to seek your assistance, hoping that you can kindly offer me some revision tips regarding my application and resume. ※ I’m writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor to offer me some revision tips. 中间段 1. 主旨句 ※ Here are my problems. ※ Here are the problems that have been disturbing me lately. ※ I wish you would be so kind as to give me some suggestions/help on the following problems. 2. 要点内容 1）文字 ※ For one thing, I would appreciate it if you could help me improve my vocabulary and grammar used in my application letter, which is of great significance to me. ※ I’m afraid that there might be some the grammar and vocabulary mistakes in my application materials as a result of mother tongue interference(干扰). 2）格式 ※ For another, would you be so kind as to tell me if my application letter has been written in the correct (appropriate) format? ※ There’s likely to be something wrong with the format considering that it’s