读后续写：高分技巧四个讲义-2023届高三英语二轮复习写作专项

一、有颜值的读后续写高分技巧之四 只有好的技巧，若是没有美好的环境来烘托，肯定还是远远不过的。 今天就抛砖引玉，看看如何使环境氛围变成“高颜值”。 1、阳光 · The setting sun cast an orange glow over the mountains. · · With the sunlight flooding/streaming into the room, she was bathed in the warmth. · · Bathed in the golden sunlight, the lake was shining charmingly as the breeze gently left the ripples when it passed by. · 2、酷热 · A heat wave swept over the whole town so that everyone could feel his skin beginning to roast under the raging shine. · · The sun seemed to be trapped in the narrow streets, and even in the shadows the heat still lingered. · 3、温暖 · When the air hit the burning oven inside, a strong flow of warmth made its way towards my body. · · It's a warm spring morning with sunlight shining gently on the ground, like a mother lovingly strokes her baby. · 二、句式也要有颜值 打磨句式,交替使用长短句 1、句式就是句子的结构方式,句式的丰富多样是体现考生语言能力的重要维度。 2、短句子适用于表述概念,陈述事实,增强叙述的力度,给人以精练强调之感。 3、长句子经常用于描写和解释一个完整的情况,给人以严谨深刻之感。 4、长短句的交替使用,不仅能丰富句式的表达方式,还能增加文章的节奏感,使文章流畅自然,活泼生动。 5、题目示例下面选取一篇读后续写的第一段作简要分析 Paragraph 1: Kelly rushed down to the sidewalk but couldn't reach her crying daughter. Then an idea struck her.She hurried upstairs and knocked on the door of the neighbor on the second floor, with Isabelle following closely behind. Hearing what had happened, the neighbor let them in and joined the rescue. From the window opened they were able to reach the crying girl. Then they carefully pulled her inside. Kelly held Anne in her arms tightly and examined if she was hurt. She was pretty shocked to find that Anne only had a bruise on her right arm. 文章主要讲述了 Kelly最近搬了新家,还没来得及给位于六楼的公寓窗户安装防护栏。两岁的女儿Anne坐在窗台上玩玩具,却不慎坠落。万幸的是,Anne落在了公寓楼入口处的雨篷上, Kelly非常害怕,急忙冲下楼去救她。续写部分以短句开篇,直接点明故事情节走向,干脆利落。中间用长句描写了Kely的做法和邻居的反应,其中,with复合结构、非谓语动词作状语、宾语从句等语法结构的使用丰富了句子内容,增加了文章的可读性。 三、上期读后续写练习 3范文与解析 1、文章大意 文章讲述了一个生活在大森林的三口之家的故事。在一个寒冷的冬天,热爱森林的孩子突然一病不起,生命垂危,他唯一的希望是父亲能捕一只鸟来和他玩。然而,这个季节里,鸟儿早已飞走,于是父母做了一只栩栩如生的木鸟,给孩子带来了希望。 2、写作指导 Paragraph1的开头是"父亲再次晚上去了儿子的房间",再结合文章最后一段的" Late on that night, lgor's fat