内容正文:
读后续写专题复习
写作指导
三大原则
01原文一致原则
02正能量原则
03曲折性原则
内容要前后衔接,上下连贯 语言表达风格一致。
故事内容一定要正能量,弘扬社会主义核心价值观。如迷路了但最终一定回到了家;失败了或遇到困难了,但最终一定成功了;吵架了但最后一定是言归于好,和睦相处;犯错了,最后一定会改过自新,重新做人;贼逃了,最后一定是绳之以法,等等。
故事情节应跌宕起伏,其中人物会遇到困难或问题,但最终能解决。
写作指导
四个步骤
读文画关键
勾画主要人物、地点、动作、情绪;,理清脉络
谋段定框架
两段首句定一框;二框二首正能量(逻辑衔接+承上启下)
一段框架=原文结尾+两段首句
二段框架=第二段首句+正能量结尾
构思定情节
三大原则+原文伏笔
誊写成文章
下笔:人称 、时态(过去时)、衔接词、高级句式。
核查:词数、语法、词汇、标点
七三四法则
七个不
三个原则
四个步骤
一不增加人物
二不增加旁支情结
三不用过多对话
四不用负能量结局
五不在文末设置悬念
六不偏离原文主题
七不违背逻辑常理
原文一致原则
正能量原则
曲折性原则
读文画关键
谋段定框架
构思定情节
誊写成文章
读后续写
A Great Monday
A new Monday came. After breakfast, I prepared for my math test for the last minute. I was confident that I would get a high mark. I left my house, and minutes later, I was sitting with my friends on the school bus. We were busy talking about how we spent our weekend. At one stop, a boy named Ryan got on hurriedly. He tripped(绊倒)over someone’s foot and THUMP! He fell flat onto the floor.
Every one of us on the bus looked on and laughed crazily. Ryan picked himself up, dusted his jacket and made his way to an empty seat. He tried to laugh with us, but his face was burning with embarrassment. The rest of the morning flew by. I did well in my math test. It wasn't long before the lunch bell rang. I met my friends from the cheer-leading team in the dining hall.
When we finished eating, we headed out to the courtyard to practice a cheer we would do at that night's football game. After much practice, we finally managed to do the cheer perfectly. We decided to practice it again one last time. Again, just like the rest of my day so far, the cheer was going great. I raised my leg for one last toe touch. RIIPPP! I felt my jeans was torn down(裂开)in the middle of my backside
I froze.I had no idea what to do but stand still. Then I heard people burst out laughing and I saw them pointing at my broken jeans. Trying to cover myself with my hands, I tried to laugh too, but I felt tears began to well up in my eyes.
1.读文画关键
人物、地点、动作、情绪
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