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Continuation writing 2016年10月浙江真题 试题与评分 Language Plot 总体的评分原则：（参照样卷和评分细则） 与所给短文（情节）及开头语（语言）上的连贯。 情节的拓展有多条线索，只要情节逻辑合理，内容不离谱，存在一定的合理性都接受。 更注重的是运用语言传达意义的能力，看语言描写的生动性和丰富性。对情节的评分不能超过对语言的评判。如果还能在文章最后扎好“袋口”，回照原文，那更好。关注情节，语言和主题三者的关系。 少于130，扣2分，没有上限。 关键词少一个扣1分，最多扣3分。 没有划线，少2-3个，扣1分，少4-5个，扣2分。 拼写和标点错误太多或影响意义的传达，扣1-2分。 抄袭得0分，有自己写的一两句相关句子，给1-2分。 Language Plot Plot when What happened to Jane How did she feel Plot on the way by the time they reached after she had climbed as night was beginning to fall at the break of day as she picked her way… a few minutes later Para.1 it was getting dark again Para.2 it was daybreak quarreled and got lost angry scared regretful found water and food saw two helicopters miss Tom so much tired joyful excited hopeful ? ? 文本理解: 故事山能够帮助迅速理清故事结构，锻炼写作能力。 Plot Para.1 But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Para.2 It was daybreak when Jane woke up. 与所给短文融洽度高！ Para.6 Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. Jane’s feeling surroundings Jane fell asleep attempts/efforts difficulties 与所提供各段开头语衔接合理！ ? Theme+ what she did after waking up rescued by the helicopter sent by Tom their reaction when meeting again 2024届高一读后续写语料库---情绪专题 【害怕】 He held his breath. He wanted to run, but found himself rooted to the spot. 他屏住呼吸，不敢出声。他想跑，却发现自己在原地一动不动。 I just stood there, numb with fear. 我呆站在那儿，吓得动弹不得。 Hearing the sharp scream, she froze with horror. 听到那尖叫声，他吓呆了。 He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror. 他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。 Fear slowly crept upon her. 恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。 2024届高一读后续写语料库---情绪专题 【害怕】 6. She was struck with horror when...她感到恐惧…… 7. She was choked by fear.她因恐惧而窒息。 8. Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.她脸色苍白地站在那里，舌头打结。 9. She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.她浑身颤抖，觉得如坐针毡。 10. Her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly suffocated她心脏跳得如此剧烈以至于她觉得要窒息了。 情绪+动作描写 内心描写 神态描写 环境