如何增加细节 课件-2023届高三英语一轮复习应用文写作

"我们一起研究高考" 英语高考应用文写作 What is a good writing？ Structure handwriting Language 总结：审好题布好局；用好语言写好字 A good composition Para.1: 2-3句（写作背景+写作目的） Para.2: 6-8句（主题句+细节） Para.3: 1-2句（希望\ 祝愿\再次感谢\再次道歉 ） Structure/outline: * Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾) * Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理,行文流畅) * No Chinglish (避免中文式英文) * No Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误) * With correctly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns(词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化) * well-developed，natural and persuasive(逻辑合理，表达自然具有说服力） Language: Handwriting Three principles (3个原则） 1. 字母要饱满，大小要一致。 2. 字母与字母之间，单词与单词之间间距要一致。 3. 倾斜度要一致。 （书写流畅自然，卷面要整洁没有墨团） 书面表达专题（二） 如何增加细节？ 市一中 Monica How to extend effective details? 2017年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(课标全国卷Ⅲ) 第二节　书面表达(满分25分) 假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入,内容包括: 1.球队活动; 2.报名方式及截止日期。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 1.which information should be extended(哪些信息需要扩展) 2. from what aspects to extend the details(从哪方面扩展) 3. extend effective details (有效扩展) 4. know the logic of the details(逻辑性) Discuss the principles details Specific examples Causes/ purposes Results/meaning Ways/conditions What details do we often extend? Observe the writing sample and discover the rules! Dear Eric, I have been told that our school team is recruiting new members. Knowing that you are enthusiastic about table tennis and quite skilful in playing it, I’m writing to invite you to join our school table tennis team. Our team will organize quite a number of activities for the newcomers, ranging from the easiest to the hardest so as to get the new quickly aware of the basic knowledge of playing table tennis. Besides, Regular training under the guidance of professional coaches will be carried out every Friday afternoon, from which we can make great progress. Meanwhile, there will be intense competitions between our team and teams from brother schools. Quite interesting! Right? If you are interested in what