内容正文:
第一节 应用文
假如你是红星中学高三(1)班学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim对中国的数字化生活很感兴趣,来信询问相关情况。请你给他回邮件,
内容包括:
(1)介绍你身边的数字化生活;
(2)阐述你的看法;
(3)询问对方情况。
注意:
(1)词数不少于80;
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
Glad to know you're interested in the digital life of Chinese, I'd like to tell you something about it around me.
① To tell you the truth, I can't help feeling amazed at the great changes that digital life has brought to us. With a smart phone in hand, I can do almost anything. Just name a few on the list-learning online, getting medical service on the Internet and shopping with a click. I can even travel across China without taking cash!
②As a student, I surely enjoy living in such a digital world, which gives me easy access to abundant resources, news and learning materials alike. If only I wish, it offers the chance to better myself, physically or mentally. However, the digital life also has its downsides. Many elderly Chinese feel left behind, including my grandparents. So I often try to help them keep up.
How about the digital life in your country? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文,话题是介绍中国的数字化生活,写作时应该以第二人称为主,第一人称为辅。时态上用一般将来时和一般现在时。注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用,可以适当增加一些衔接词,以便行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①be interested in对......感兴趣
②can't help doing sth.忍不住做某事
③try to do sth.试图做某事
④keep up跟上(时代)
【高分句型】
①To tell you the truth, I can't help feeling amazed at the great changes that digital life has brought to us.(不定式作目的状语;that引导的限定性定语从句)
②As a student, I surely enjoy living in such a digital world, which gives me easy access to abundant resources, news and learning materials alike. (which引导的非限定性定语从句)
【结构布局】
引言:说明写信的目的
中心:介绍介绍你身边的数字化生活;阐述你的看法;询问对方情况
结尾:询问笔友国家的数字化生活,期待回复
【拓展词汇】
①look forward to/expect期待
②offer sth. to sb./supply sb. with sth.提供某物给某人
【拓展句型】
①Mobile payment is the most popular in China, which has