02 Unit 4 单元话题写作专练-2022-2023学年高中英语随堂检测+课后培优练（人教版2019）（选择性必修第二册）

第一节 应用文 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，最近你收到英国好友Jim的来信，得知他和朋友们骑车旅行一周的计划没有得到父母的许可，他感到非常沮丧。请你给Jim写一封回信，内容包括： 1.表示安慰； 2.给出建议。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim,                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Jim,       I'm sorry to hear that you didn't get your parents' permission to go on a week-long bike trip with your friends. You're upset and I'd like to give you some comfort and advice.      ①As far as I'm concerned, the most important thing that you need do now is have a good conversation with your parents, which is beneficial to your relationship. ②Besides, there is no need for you to be disappointed about this because your parents just want to protect you from potentially dangerous situation.       I hope you will get better in no time. Yours, Li Hua 【思路点拨】 这是一篇应用文写作，话题为假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，最近你收到英国好友Jim的来信，得知他和朋友们骑车旅行一周的计划没有得到父母的许可，他感到非常沮丧。请你给Jim写一封回信。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。 【结构布局】 引言：表示安慰 中心：给出建议 ​​​​​​​结尾：表达期望 【高分词汇】 ①permission同意，许可 ②as far as I'm concerned就我而言 ③protect...from...保护……不受…… 【高分句型】 ①As far as I'm concerned, the most important thing that you need do now is have a good conversation with your parents, which is beneficial to your relationship.  (which引导的非限制性定语从句) ②Besides, there is no need for you to be disappointed about this because your parents just want to protect you from potentially dangerous situation. （because引导的原因状语从句) 【拓展词汇】 ①as far as sb. be concerned依某人来看 ②give/offer sb. advice/tips/suggestions on sth.在某方面给某人建议 ③be of some help to对……有所帮助 【拓展句型】 ① I firmly believe, with your effort, you can manage to get over/overcome these difficulties.我坚信，通过您的努力，您会成功克服这些困难的。 ②You have asked me for my advice about..., and I will try to make some conductive suggestions.对于你来信问我关于……的事，现提供几条建议。 第二节 读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 As an old saying goes, we make a living b