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层级二 读后续写如何开头和结尾
No.1 如何写出靓丽的开头
1.副词突显动作等
Carefully,_ he stepped over all the broken glass.
Joyfully he skipped up the street.
(浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1:But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Immediately,_an_absolute_darkness_ruled_the_forest. (时间副词衔接+环境描写)
2.形容词短语表明心态
Curious_to_know_what_was_inside , he tiptoed into the dark cave.
Unable_to_say_a_word , he was rooted to the spot.
(浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Desperate_and_hopeless , Jane knelt down, tears streaming down her face.(并列情绪形容词)
(浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Weak_as_she_was , she struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance.(状态形容词+as/though 引导的倒装句)
(浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. _Afraid_that_I_might_hurt_the_lovely_small_creature , I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse.(情绪形容词+从句)
(浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 2: We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Exhausted_and_hungry , I wondered if we could find our way back.
3.非谓语动词的烘托
Looking around him cautiously, he slipped into the room and softly closed the door.
Exhausted , he was glad the race was finally over.
(浙江高考读后续写范文摘录) Para 1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Feeling_disappointed , Jane had to stay alone for another night.(现在分词+情绪形容词)
(浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Feeling_refreshed , she continued to walk along the stream to find the way out.(现在分词+状态形容词)
4.使用从句
As_he_walked , he whistled.
Although_he_was_afraid , he jumped right in.
5.使用介词短语
At_the_end_of_the_lane he suddenly stopped.
At_the_sight_of_the_snake , the little girl screamed at the top of her voice.
6.对话或独白
“Let's_see_who_gets_there_first!” Rachel shouted, as she pedaled fast and zoomed past Jenny.
“Hold_on_tight!” My father yelled.We just finished bucking in as the coaster jerked into motion.This was my first roller coaster ride.
(浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1: The