内容正文:
1.假定你是李华,为了丰富学生的课余生活和锻炼学生的意志力,上周末,你校组织了一次四十五公里的远足活动。请你在校英语报上写一篇报道。内容包括:
1.活动的目的; 2.活动的情况; 3.活动的反响。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】
In order to enrich students’ after school life and exercise their willpower, our school organized a 45-kilometre hiking activity last weekend. All the students as well as our teachers participated in it.
As scheduled, we assembled outside the school gate at 8:00 a.m. and headed for the destination. We chatted, sang and laughed along the way, enjoying the fresh air. Some students felt exhausted, but they continued with the support and encouragement of their classmates and teachers.
The activity benefited us greatly. Not only did it relax us but it also stimulated our passion for outdoor exercise and cultivated our perseverance.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于新闻报道,要求考生就你校组织了一次四十五公里的远足活动写一篇报道。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
鼓励:encourage →inspire 参加:join in →participate in
安排:arrange →schedule 疲惫的:tired →exhausted
2.句式拓展
句式转化
原句:Some students felt exhausted, but they continued with the support and encouragement of their classmates and teachers.
拓展句:Though some students felt exhausted, they continued with the support and encouragement of their classmates and teachers.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] In order to enrich students’ after school life and exercise their willpower, our school organized a 45-kilometre hiking activity last weekend. (运用了动词不定式作目的状语)
[高分句型2] Not only did it relax us but it also stimulated our passion for outdoor exercise and cultivated our perseverance. (运用了部分倒装结构)
2.你校将于本周末组织一次校外远足活动。请你在校英语报上写封倡议书,号召同学们踊跃参与。
内容包括: 1.活动目的; 2.注意事项; 3.呼吁参加。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,已使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Aimed at helping us students release the pressure of study and raising our collective awareness, our school has decided to organize a special hiking this Saturday.
As we all know, hiking can be a