作文02 书面表达微技能——复杂句式+词语替换+读后续写语料库-2023年高考英语二轮复习专题提升“精品课件汇”

作文02 书面表达复杂句式词语替换读后续写语料库-2023年高考英语二轮复习专题提升“精品课件汇” 2023 一、书面表达复杂句式 二、写作高级词汇替换 三、书面表达一句多译 四、读后续写高级语料 四、读后续写增分结构 一、书面表达复杂句式 依据高考英语书面表达评分细则，是否“使用较复杂结构”是衡量一篇书面表达“具备较强的语言运用能力”的重要标志之一。要提高语言表达的档次，在复杂结构上就不能一味地使用简单句和陈述句，而应该根据实际情况灵活运用所学各种结构。正如在绿荫场上，既要有长传冲调，又要有短传渗透、下底传中、中路包抄，只有这样丰富的战术才能擒敌制胜。同样，复杂结构有助于考生在高考中出类拔萃，赢得高分。 一、书面表达复杂句式 1. 改变时态 The bell is ringing now. (一般) There goes the bell. (高级) The competition is held in our school once a year. (一般) This annual event has been held in our school for years. (高级) 一、书面表达复杂句式 2. 改变语态 People suggest that the conference be put off. (一般) It is suggested that the conference be put off. (高级) The two pictures tell us different people celebrate Earth Day in different ways. (一般) As can be seen from the two pictures, different people celebrate Earth Day in different ways. (高级) 一、书面表达复杂句式 3. 使用不定式 I hurried to school by bike and found the gate was locked. (一般) I hurried to school by bike, only to find the gate locked. (高级) It is reported that his latest novel has been translated into several foreign languages. (一般) His latest novel is reported to have been translated into several foreign languages. (高级) 一、书面表达复杂句式 4. 使用过去分词 She walked out of the room and many students followed her. (一般) Followed by many students, she walked out of the room. (高级) Once it is seen, it can never be forgotten. (一般) Once seen, it can never be forgotten. (高级) 一、书面表达复杂句式 5. 使用动名词 When we arrived at the farm, we were warmly welcomed. (一般) On our arriving at the farm, we were warmly welcomed. (高级) The driver escaped and didn’t stop, he left the old man lying on the road. (一般) The driver escaped without stopping, leaving the old man lying on the road. (高级) 一、书面表达复杂句式 6. 使用现在分词 After he had finished his homework, he went home. (一般) Having finished his homework, he went home. ( 高级) The students headed for their destination by bus. They were talking and laughing all the way. (一般) The students headed for their destination by bus, talking and laughing