未来与梦想 热点 04 -备战2023年中考英语高分作文（浙江专用版）

备战2023年中考英语高分作文 热点04 未来与梦想 一、话题作文 1．中国的高速发展离不开每个人的努力，科技的飞跃，社会的进步和文化的传播都离不开一个个优秀的个体。假如你是李华，请用“My dream job”为题，写一篇英语文章向校报投稿。 内容包括： 1. 阐述你将来想做什么样的工作。 2. 能为我们祖国做哪些贡献。 注意事项： 1.90字左右。 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。 My dream job _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 My dream job As the saying goes, “Great dreams make a bright future.” My dream is to be a doctor in the future. I think it’s great to be a doctor. When I see sick people in the hospital or on TV, I can’t help worrying about them and want to give them a hand. If I become a doctor, I can help many patients get well. What’s more, being a doctor isn’t only about treating patients. Doctors also do research and experiments so that they can make a contribution to medical service of our country. I’ll make an effort to become a doctor. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文为一篇写梦想中的工作的记叙文。 ②时态：本文应用一般现在时和一般将来时两种时态。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当增加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出文章的主题：我梦想中的工作是什么。 第二步，介绍喜欢这份工作的理由，以及这份工作能为祖国做出什么贡献。 第三步，总结全文，表达原望。 [亮点词汇] ①as the saying goes 俗话说 ②can’t help doing sth. 忍不住做某事 ③make a contribution to… 为……做出贡献 [高分句型] ①When I see sick people in the hospital or on TV, I can’t help worrying about them and want to give them a hand. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②If I become a doctor, I can help many patients get w