读后续写如何得高分 课件-2023届高三英语写作专项

读后续写如何得高分? 目录 CONTENTS 1 框架的搭建 2 4 3 内容的多变 细节的描写 平时的准备 1 文章框架的搭建—“四句话”建框架 2 Response 1 Reason 1 Ending Para. 1 At this moment, a couple, probably my parents age, passed by me. Para. 2 Finally, the drunk man left, still saying something in his mouth. Response 1: 接下来发生什么? Reason: 为什么the drunk man left? Response 2: 接下来发生什么? Ending: 弘扬人间真善美,传播正能量 1 文章框架的搭建—ending的形式 名言式结尾 悟道理式结尾 写景式结尾 呼应式结尾 名言式结尾 Rose given, fragrance in hand. 赠人玫瑰,手有余香。 You reap what you sow. 种瓜得瓜;善有善报 悟道理式结尾 From this, Tom learned what true courage was. 写景式结尾 Their laughter lingered around the house. 呼应式结尾(回忆体) Interestingly, the story was still engraved in my mind. 2 内容的多变—“四个多变” 句式多变 主语多变 语态多变 词性多变 句式多变 非谓语,with的复合结构,独立主格,倒装,强调,定语从句,虚拟语气... ※ 量化 3/4个doing/done; 2/3个with; 1/2个独立主格;1/2个倒装; 1个强调;1个虚拟;1个定从... ※ 一简一长 ,切忌复杂句堆砌 ② 主语多变 ③ 语态多变 :主被动变换 ④ 词性多变 动词变名词:arrive-arrival; improve-improvement eg. As soon as I arrived at hotel, ... On my arrival at hotel,... eg. You have improved your work. This is a great improvement on your previous work. 形容词变名词:angry-anger; excited-excitement eg. Jan slammed her fist on the desk in anger. The dog leapt and wagged its tail in excitement. 3 细节的描写—动作、心理、外貌、环境 如果你要写风,就不能只写风。 你要写, 柳条轻轻柔柔飘入你心中; 竹筏轻轻飘荡; 湖面在泛粼光; 船上悬挂的铃儿,响呀响呀响叮当; 写散了的大雾; 写倾斜的雨竹; 写迎着大雨慢慢走出,艰难每一步; 别只写风。 3 细节的描写 你要写伤心,就不要只写sad, 你要写tears rolling down; 你要写紧张,就不要只写nervous, 你要写have butterflies in my stomach; 你要写开心,就不要只写happy,你要写be wild with joy; 你要写激动,就不要只写excited, 你要写overwhelmed with excitement; 你要写感动,就不要只写moved, 你要写 warmth flows in my heart; 你要写困惑,就不要只写puzzled, 你要写eyebrows knot together... 3 细节的描写 ※ 切忌通篇对话—直接引语 ※ 动作要具体化 1. +副词/with 伴随状语 He stood; He was awake;He said... He stood still; He was wide awake; He said with sorrow 2. 归纳表示具体动作的动词 say: mutter; whisper; utter; yell; scream; announce... cry: moan; sob; weep; howl; choke; burt into tears.. 4 平时的准备 01 02 03 规范练习 积累素材 及时反馈 保证频率 一周两次 答题卡 限时练 20 min. 1. 规范练习 2. 积累素材 2. 积累素材 2. 积累素材 3. 及时反馈 灵魂四问: 1. 主语多变吗? 2. 句式多变吗? 3. 语态多变吗? 4. 词性多变吗? $