读后续写语篇练习（对待男孩犯的错误）课件-2023届高三英语写作专项

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 1 ——对待男孩犯的错误 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 After 20 years as a full-time wife and mother, I became a school bus driver. I was happy in my new work because I loved kids. When I think about my years of bus driving, I can’t help thinking of Charlie. Charlie, with blond hair and big gray eyes, began riding my bus in September of my fourth year driving. From that day on, Charlie was a trial. If a fight broke out, I didn’t have to turn my head to know who had started it. If a girl was crying, chances were Charlie had pulled her hair. No matter how I spoke to him, gently or firmly, he wouldn’t say a word. He’d just stare at me with those big gray eyes of his. I learned that Charlie’s father was dead and he didn’t live with his mother. I was sure that this child needed to feel some warmth from me. So, when he’d pass by, I’d pat him on the arm or sometimes gave him a hug. 4 4 续写原文 One day, a girl gave me a small tin heart on which were written, “I love Polly and Polly loves me.” Considering it as a qualification to my job, I put it up on the dashboard, but later found it gone. Everybody thought it was Charlie who took it but he refused to admit it. I asked him to come forward, stuck my hand into his pocket and immediately I felt it ---the small tin heart. Charlie stared at me and seemed to be waiting for what he’d come to expect from the world. I was about to pull the tin heart out of Charlie’s pocket when I stopped myself. Let him keep it, a voice seemed to whisper. “It must have fallen off before I got here,” I said to the kids. Without a word, Charlie returned to his seat. When he got off at his stop, he didn’t so much as glance at me. That summer Charlie moved away. 5 5 续写原文分析 作为一名校车司机，我总是不禁想起了查理。 查理有着金色的头发和灰色的大眼睛，在我开车四年级的九月开始乘坐我的公共汽车。 查理调皮捣蛋的行为总是会引起我的注意。我得知查理的父亲已经去世，他没有和母亲住在一起。我确信这个孩子需要从我身上感受到一些温暖。所以，当他经过时，我会拍拍他的胳膊，或者有时给他一个拥抱。有一天，我车上的一个东西不见了。查理盯着我，似乎在等待他对这个世界的期望。我正要从查理的口袋里掏出铁皮心脏时，我停了下来。让他保留吧，一个声音似乎在低语。 6 6 续写原文 Paragraph 1: