读后续写语篇练习（小男孩替爸妈买礼物）课件-2023届高三英语写作专项

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 1 ——小男孩替爸妈买礼物 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 I was walking around in a Big Bazar store doing shopping, when I saw a cashier(收银员) talking to a boy who was about 5 or 6 years old. The cashier said, “I'm sorry, but you don't have enough money to buy this doll.” Then the little boy turned to me and asked, “Uncle, are you sure I don't have enough money?” I counted his cash and replied, “You know that you don't have enough money to buy the doll, my dear.” The little boy was still holding the doll in his hands. Then, I asked him who he wished to give this doll to. “It's the doll that my sister loved most and wanted so much. I want to give it to her as a birthday gift. I have to give the doll to my mommy so that she can give it to my sister when she goes there. I also want to buy a white rose for my mommy to show my love for her, but I...” He was so sad while saying this. 4 4 续写原文 “My mommy and my sister had a car accident the other day. My sister has passed away. Daddy says that my mommy is going to die very soon, so I think that she can take the doll with her and give it to my sister.” The little boy looked up at me and said, “I asked my mommy to wait for me. I need her to wait until I come back from the mall.” Then he showed me a very nice photo of him. He then told me, “I want my mommy to take my picture with her so my sister won't forget me. I love my mommy and I hope she doesn't have to leave me, but my daddy says that she has to go to be with my little sister.” 5 5 续写段首语 Paragraph1: Then he looked again at the doll sadly and very quietly. Paragraph2: The little boy paid for the doll immediately and said, “My mommy loves white roses very much.” 6 6 续写思路分析 第1段：然后他又悲伤地、非常安静地看着娃娃。 1.看到这里，我被小男孩说的话深深感动，眼睛里充满了泪水。 2. 3.4.我还没来得及说些什么来安慰他，他就抬头看着我，恳求道：“叔叔，你能借给我一些吗？我相信爸爸可以还给你。 5. 6.7.我不假思索地搂着他，轻声说：“亲爱的，这是你需要的钱。去给妹买生日礼物。她一定很高兴和自豪地收到它。 7 7 续写思路分析 第2段：小男孩立即付钱买娃娃，说：“我妈妈非常喜欢白玫瑰。 1.那一刻，我意识到男孩必须去花店为他的母亲买一朵白玫瑰。 2.如果他自己去那里，他可能会错过最后一次见到母亲的