读后续写语篇练习（炮火中救人）课件-2023届高三英语写作专项

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 1 ——炮火中救人 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 Dawn came slowly. A shaft of sunlight reached into the 4-meter-deep crater（弹坑），making the metal of the bomb shine. The boys were numb and tight, and hungry. They tried not to look at the huge shape of the bomb that appeared over them. Harry suddenly opened his eyes and seized Jack's arm. "Listen!" he whispered. Jack's eye widened instantly, and both boys strained their ears. They could hear a man talking softly. The voice seemed a long way off. Jack went to shout, but Harry clamped his hand over Jack's mouth. "Don't shout/' he hissed（发出嘘声）, "We'll be blown into pieces." The soft voice came nearer and nearer. Suddenly, an army captain appeared at the top of crater. He was talking to a mouthpiece（话筒）around his neck. He stopped talking when he saw the boys. "What the..." he said, “Who are you?" Hairy found his voice, "Jack and Harry Brown." "Is that dog dead?" asked the captain. “No: he’s sleeping," said Harry. 4 4 续写原文 The captain spoke into the mouthpiece again, “Sergeant（中士）," he said, stopped and took a breath before he went on. “There are two kids and a dog down here." Then the captain crouched down and stared closely at the bomb. “Don't move and don't speak," he said, "or we'll all go up." He began talking quietly to his sergeant. Jack and Harry were too stiff to move. They held Raf, the dog, tightly and waited. Another man appeared at the top of the crater. "I thought so," he said, "It's them all right?" "It’s Old Tin Hat!" whispered Jack. Old Tin Hat was carrying a ladder. He and the captain lowered the ladder into the loose earth next to the two boys. "Keep still," the captain warned them. As the captain held on at the top. Old Tin Hat started to come down the ladder very slowly, very gently, step by step. At last, he reached the bottom, and with one movement, he lifted Jack on his back. Harry watched as Jack was carried up. It seemed to take an age. 5 5 续写段首语 Paragraph 1: W