内容正文:
备战2023年中考英语高分作文
热点06 总书记寄语
一、材料作文
1.习近平总书记同北大师生代表座谈时提出:“人才培养是育人和育才相统一的过程,育人是本,人无德不立,育人的根本在于立德,这是人才培养的辨证法。”为落实立德树人根本任务,各学校围绕德育教育举办了一系列的活动,根据下面思维导图内容提示以“Moral(德育)Education”为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍如何践行德育教育。
要求:
1. 书写认真规范,词数不少于80词,开头已给出不计入总词数;
2. 短文必须包括所有要点提示,语句通顺,意思连贯,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Moral Education
As teenagers, we are the hope of our country. To be excellent teenagers, let me tell you how to improve our moral education.
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【参考范文】
Moral Education
As teenagers, we are the hope of our country. To be excellent teenagers, let me tell you how to improve our moral education.
At home, we should do some housework. We also should save electricity and water when using them. As for the relationship with our parents, we should have a good communication with them. At school, we should obey the school rules. The harder we study, the better we will be in the future. What’s more, we can take part in some volunteer activities in our free time. We can plant more trees to protect the environment. Last but not least, we should love our country. We should try our best to spread our culture.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头已给出,引出“如何提高德育教育”的话题;
第二步,根据提示内容分别从家里,学校,社会,感受等方面提出自己的想法。
[亮点词汇]
①as for至于
②have a good communication with与……有良好的沟通
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
①To be excellent teenagers, let me tell you how to improve our moral education.(动词不定式作目的状语)
②The harder we study, the better we will be in the future. (the+比较级,the+比较级)
2.习总书记说,实现中国梦是一场历史接力赛,当代青年要在实现民族复兴的赛道上奋勇争先。作为新时代的中国青年,实现中国梦的接力棒即将传递到你们手里,你应该从哪些方面做好准备?请你根据以下提示,以“How to Make Myself Better”为题,写一篇英语短文。
要求:1. 参