读后续写语篇练习（寻找钥匙，错怪小鸟）课件-2023届高三英语写作专项

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 1 ——寻找钥匙，错怪小鸟 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目再现 3 3 续写原文 About ten years ago, my wife and I took a trip to the Grand Canyon in Arizona. I didn't like to carry all my keys in my pocket during a hike, so I took away the key to the car and left the rest in the car. When we came back, I put the key somewhere in the car without reattaching it to the key ring. Then we made a fire, cooked some food, and went to sleep in the back of the SUV. The next morning, we were cleaning up our campsite when I saw a bird inside my car. I walked over, and it flew away. When we got in the car to go home, I couldn't find the key. We searched and searched even emptying out the car completely, but it was gone. Then it hit me that the bird must have taken it. After all, those birds are known for stealing shiny things and decorating their nests with them. Keys are shiny. The bird was the thief! It made perfect sense to me. So I decided to find its nest. 4 4 续写原文 But there is a problem: As everyone knows, the Grand Canyon is a little large in area, so I didn't like my chances of actually finding a certain nest belonging to a certain bird in a certain tree in all that space. But what other choice did I have? My wife was not encouraging me. She said, “Are you crazy? You'll never find it! The Grand Canyon is the biggest hole on Earth!” I didn't answer and walked steadily forward until her laughter died away. I struggled to keep hope as I searched dozens of trees and tracked every singing bird. It was like searching a needle in the sea. But, oh, how great my victory would be when I held the missing key from the bird's nest. 5 5 段首句 Para 1: After two hours of searching, I finally gave up and returned to the car. Para 2: The next day, we stopped at a service centre for lunch. 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 已知短文内容 通过阅读文章可知，大约十年前，作者和妻子去亚利桑那州的大峡谷旅行，回来的时候不知道把车钥匙放哪里了，并怀疑可能是被一只鸟偷走了，于是开始寻找丢失的钥匙。 8 8 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点