广东一模读后续写讲评公开课课件-2023届高中英语二轮复习

Continuation Writing——Read, Plot and Write(RPW) 以广一模读后续写为例 唐莉Jasmine 博罗综合高级中学 Class Geography Bee Room Five Step 1: warming-up (Role play) 01 02 In-Class Preliminary Bee The 5th grade final But an event makes everything different... Hector picked up the envelope dropped out from Mr. Adler’s bag, and he took a peep inside. Step 2: Summary Para.5:to be or not to be build-up Para.4: Hector picked up the Q&A evelope excited curious beginning climax Para.1-3 in-class preliminary bee. at a loss Step 3: Textual analysis couryard Mr. Adler: great but disorganized clue:morning’s questions were lost classroom To be Not to be Conflict risk losing qualification win his conscience win the 5th grade Geo Bee lose the virtue Honesty Cheating Step 3: Textual analysis Theme: Honesty Para.5:to be or not to be Continuation para.1: Hector told the truth to Mr. Adler ending Continuation para.2: the Fifth Grade Geography Bee resolution build-up Para.4: Hector picked up the Q&A evelope joyful curious nervous excited beginning climax Para.1-3 in-class preliminary bee. at a loss Step 3: Textual analysis classroom couryard office lecture hall Honesty Step 4: Reading conclusion Before he realized it, Hector found himself standing in Mr. Adler's room. Paragraph 1 Step 4: How to plot? The next day the entire school came to watch the Fifth Grade Geography Bee. Paragraph 2 Hector was allowed to take part in the Grade final tomorrow. 衔接性 Feelings: Words: Mr. Adler’s reaction： Solutions： hesitation，nervousness confess punish or forgive ? change questions 9 Step 4: How to plot? Paragraph 2 The next day the entire school came to watch the Fifth Grade Geography Bee. Hector learnt a lesson about honesty and integrity. Feelings: Thoughts: Actions: Reflections: excited, confident questions lost the competition honesty is the best policy 10 Step 4: How to write? draw a picture To tell To Show Hector was nervous. Hearing this, Hector flushed and lowered his head, trying to avoid eye-contact w