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选择社团
假定你是李华,某国际学校学生。新学期学校开设了文学、科技和摄影三个社团,你校新西兰交换生Biff不知如何选择,写信向你求助。请你给他回信,内容包括:
1.推荐某一社团;
2.简介该社团;
3.告知申请方式。
参考词汇:
文学社 the literature club
科技社 the science club
摄影社 the photography club
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Step1: Analyze the title
类型:
时态:
人称:
要点:
推荐信、建议信
一般现在时
以第二、三人称为主
1.推荐某一社团
2.简介该社团
3.告知申请方式
Para 1:
Para 2:
Para 3:
Step2: Figure out the outline
1
2
3
写信背景+推荐社团
介绍社团(+推荐理由)
再次推荐/祝福+告知申请方式
Learning that +句子, I’m writing to recommend +n. + to you.
You just can’t miss the chance to join the ... club.
Fill in the application form(申请表) attached and submit it to thescienceclub@163.com before October 23rd.
Good luck!
which one
what order
what aspects
what details
Step 3: Brainstorm
2
介绍社团(+推荐理由)
文学社 the literature club
科技社 the science club
摄影社 the photography club
general+ specific (总—分)
specific+ general (分—总)
Why do you recommend this club?
What does this club have?
What can he/she benefit from the club?
activities
benefits
(time, place, forms, etc)
(interest, skill, friends, etc)
Step 4: Polish the language
The literature club is very popular.
This … club enjoys wide popularity among us students.
This … club is our favorite and earns our highest rating as the best … club you can join.
First funded in…, it has already attracted over 200 … lovers/ enthusiasts.
(bookworm书虫/ shutterbug摄影爱好者/ technophile科技迷)
用第三个句式改写:
First funded in the beginning of the new term, it has already attracted over 200 bookworms.
Step 4: Polish the language
将两个句子合并成一句:
The club holds monthly reading sessions in the school library where there are thousands of best-sellers out there for you to read, including mysteries, history, action, or fantasy books.
The club holds reading sessions in the school library every month.
There are thousands of best-sellers in the library for you to read, including mysteries, history, action, or fantasy books.
monthly
Step 4: Polish the language
扩写(增加细节):
In each reading group, you will find the pleasure of r