内容正文:
读后续写专练
Three rules
01原文一致原则:内容要前后衔接,上下连贯语言表达风格一致。
02正能量原则:故事内容一定要正能量,弘扬社会主义核心价值观。如迷路了但最终一定回到了家;失败了或遇到困难了,但最终一定成功了;吵架了但最后一定是言归于好,和睦相处;犯错了,最后一定会改过自新,重新做人;贼逃了,最后一定是绳之以法,等等。
03曲折性原则:凡是故事都应有跌宕起伏,其中人物会遇到困难或问题,但最终能解决。
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经典案例:
My father asked me to chat with him fora while. Actually, I was unwilling to listento his talking endlessly as he always did.My father was a lawyer, but I never wanted to go to law school or follow his path through life.
Aswas expected, he cleared his throat and started to say, Er .. What ... What do you really want to do in the beautiful future?"
I was silent for a moment playing with the cell phone. I kept thinking, Should I telI him my true thoughts? What if he getsangry? What if I let him down?" Later I replied, Well, I want to be a writer.l guessed this may not be the answer hewould expect. But surprisingly, Interesting idea!" he answered. I was shocked, speaking in a low voice with hesitation.Are you serious, Dad?"Well, you need confidence and good preparations, and you still have plenty of time. You need to find out what you reallyenjoy now. Look, it’s late. Let’s take theboat out tomorrow morning, just you and me. Maybe we can catch some crabs for dinner, and we can talk more.Early next morning we packed up the equipment and set off along the coast. Wedidn’t talk much, but enjoyed the sound of the seabirds and the sight of the coastline.
There were no big waves and blinding sunlight at that time. Let’s see if we get lucky," he said, picked up a web basket with a rope tied and threw it into the sea. We waited a while. Then my father stood up and said, Give me a hand with this," and we pulled up the crab cage onto thedeck.
To our joy, the cage was filled with dozens of soft shell crabs. Squatting down, we watched them for a moment. At first they fought against each other to climb out hard, trying to escape. Many werepulled back into the cage. Later, some gave up, but there were still some crabs trying to escape again and again.
步骤:
一、读懂大