内容正文:
高三二轮复习 书面表达(石室安魂卷6-10)专项训练2
1. 真题多维细目表
2. 命题规律与备考策略:
Ⅰ.命题规律:
1. 从命题形式上看:多采用文字提纲的半开放命题形式。2022年全国乙卷采用图表作文的命题思路,有较强开放性和灵活性;
2. 从写作题材上看:取材较广泛、内容较丰富,多为日常学习、生活和人际交往,且逐步加强英语学习活动观的实践;
3. 从体裁上看:以投稿、写书信、邮件为主,且考查形式更倾向多样化。
Ⅱ.备考策略:
1. 分析、总结近年来高考书面表达命题规律,高考备考做到有的放矢。
2. 总结并牢记高考书面表达常用的高级词汇、短语,使语言表达多样化。
3. 熟练运用定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句、倒装句等句式结构以使文章更加精彩。
4. 搜集紧跟时代脉搏,反映时代精神的社会热点话题进行背诵,仿写。
3.书面表达(高2023届石室安魂卷6-10)再现:
卷6:
假定你是李华,你在浏览某英文论坛时发现网友正在就移动支付(mobile payment)给老年人带来的困难展开讨论。请你就此发帖,要点如下:
1. 说明问题;2. 提出建议。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
时态:一般现在时为主
审题
人称:第三人称为主
写作思路
开篇点题——科技发展带来的利弊
构篇 展开说明——结合写作任务,对弊端进行具体分析
提出建议——就该问题提出相应的解决办法(至少两条)
【佳作展示】
While young people have enjoyed the convenience of mobile payment, a growing number of senior citizens find it frustrating to travel, go to hospital, or simply buy groceries — all of which increasingly involve mobile payment via smartphone. Therefore, measures should be taken to resolve the difficulties that old people face when using smart technology. First, places frequented by the elderly should not refuse payment in cash. Second, online services should keep old users in mind. Last but not least, it’s also essential for the young to give assistance, to which we should attach great significance. Only by joint efforts can seniors live a life as happy and comfortable as that of the young. Together, we will make our society more harmonious.
卷7:
你校陶艺社团(the Pottery Club)准备举办第十届陶艺作品展,请你为校英文报写一篇宣传稿,要点如下:
1. 时间地点;2. 展览内容;3. 号召参观。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【临考密押】押考向:强调基础性、增强开放性和灵活性是高考书面表达的一个显著的命题趋势。该写作任务要求考生写一篇宣传稿,更新了试题呈现形式,灵活性和开放性兼具。
文章类型:宣传稿
审题
时态:以一般将来时为主
写作思路
要点1:点明展览的时间和地点,可自由设定,合理即可。(略写)
谋篇 要点2:介绍展览内容,可涉及社团成员的陶艺作品展览及陶艺的知识讲座等。(详写)
要点3:呼吁大家前来参观(略写)
【佳作展示】
In order to enrich our school life and promote traditional Chinese culture(不定式短语作目的状语), the Pottery Club in our school will hold the 10th pottery exhibition in the new stadium next Saturday.
You will see dozens of pieces of handmade pottery which are created by the members of the club(定语从句