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第二讲 美化词句,学会谋篇
二轮· 英语
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单词和短语是文章最基本的组成单位。用词是否准确、出彩在一定程度上决定了作文能否得高分。高考英语书面表达评分标准也鼓励考生使用高级词汇,但使用高级词汇并不等于使用一些偏难、古怪的词汇,而是使用一些表意准确、形象生动、语法正确且符合以英语为母语的人的习惯表达方式的词汇。在使用词汇时,我们可以尝试如下方法。
学会用词——准确·得体·亮眼
二轮· 英语
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1.无重复原则——求雅变异
写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语,要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的词汇水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异,也是词汇高级用法的体现。恰当地使用同义词不仅可以体现雅致的文风,还有利于增强段落的统一性和连贯性。
二轮· 英语
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(2021·全国乙卷满分作文)Faced with all kinds of information on the Internet, we can't tell the difference between the true and the false.
→Faced with varieties of/a variety of/various information on the Internet, we can't tell the difference between the true and the false.
二轮· 英语
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2.词义具体化原则——生动贴切
所谓词义具体化原则,是指写作中尽量避免使用意义宽泛、模糊的词,而要根据语境使用具体生动的词。
(2022·浙江卷满分作文)I still remember the unforgettable experience of the cultural festival.
→I still remember the blast we had introducing each other to our own cultures, tasting the delicious national cuisines, and experiencing Irish dancing.
二轮· 英语
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3.晚词优先原则——新颖高级
为了表现自己的语言功底,吸引阅卷老师的眼球,尽量用高年级阶段学到的词汇代替低年级阶段学到的词汇。
(2021·全国乙卷满分作文)In conclusion,we should know its advantages and disadvantages and be smart online learners.
→In conclusion, we should have a good knowledge of/be aware of its advantages and disadvantages, being smart online learners.
二轮· 英语
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4.短语优先原则——凑词增色
用短语代替单词不仅会使文章增加亮点,而且如果关键时刻思维短路,用短语凑词是一个很好的选择。
(1)形容词变短语的方法:of+同根名词
二轮· 英语
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形容词 对应短语
very important of great importance
very useful of great use
very valuable of great value
very beneficial of great benefit
very helpful of great help
二轮· 英语
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(2020·新高考全国Ⅰ卷满分作文)The race was very beneficial to the participants,physically and mentally.Therefore,we all think highly of it,and expect more activities like this in the future.
→The race was of great benefit to the participants,physically and mentally.Therefore,we all think highly of it,and expect more activities like this in the future.
二轮· 英语
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(2)动词变短语的方法:同义短语替换
动词 对应短语
think hold the view
know/realize be aware of/have a knowledge of
use make use of/take advantage of
consider take...into consideration
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