读后续写高分句型讲义 2023届高考英语作文备考

读后续写高分句型及练习 建构维度1：独立主格 01句型一 主语+谓语……,主格名词+doing… 先看个例子： He stood there, tears of gratitude welling up in his eyes.  翻译：他站在那里，眼里涌出感激的泪水。 解析：该句使用了“主格名词+doing”的结构作伴随状语，这一结构也叫做“独立主格结构”，He是句子的主语，tears只能降级为主格，是非谓语动词welling动作的实施者，但不是整个句子的主语。 练习一下： 常见类型 1. 名词（代词）+ 现在分词 The clock __________(敲) twelve, I went to bed. （表原因） 答案：striking 2. 名词（代词）+ 过去分词 He lay there on his back, his teeth __________（咬紧牙关）, his right hand clenched on his breast. （表伴随）　 答案：set 3. 名词（代词）+ 形容词短语　　  Her face ________(苍白) with anger, she rose to go away. （表原因） 答案：pale 4. 名词（代词）+ 介词短语　　  Then, last night, I followed him here and climbed in, sword ___________(在手里). （表方式）　　 答案：in hand 5. 名词（代词）+ 副词短语　　 __________________(夏天结束了), the students returned to school. （表原因） 答案：Summer over 03建构维度2：with的复合结构在作文中的运用 01with + 宾语 + 形容词/副词/名词/介词短语/v-ing/v-ed/to do 1.with + 宾语 + 副词 The square looks more beautiful with  __________________(所有的灯都亮时).  答案：the lights on With _____________________(父母不在), Tom becomes more naughty.  答案：his parents away 2. with + 宾语 + 形容词 With__________________________（门窗大开）, the room was very cold. 答案：the door and windows open wide With ____________________(她父母死了), the girl had to leave school.  答案：her parents dead 3.with + 宾语 + 介词短语 The teacher came in with____________________(手里拿着书走进来).  答案： a book in his hand The girl looked up with _____________________(眼泪汪汪). 答案：tears in her eyes  4.with + 宾语 + 名词 They set up a football team, with ____________________（汤姆当队长）.  答案：Tom their head With _________________（有本地人当向导）, we needn't be afraid to get lost.  答案：a native our guide 5.with + 宾语 + 现在分词 （表主动，表进行） With ____________________(老师站在旁边)，she felt a bit uneasy .  答案：the teacher standing beside With __________________________________________ (随着冬天的到来)the weather is becoming colder and colder. 答案：winter coming/approaching/drawing near/around the corner, 6.with + 宾语 + 过去分词 （表被动表完成） With ______________________(工作完成了), she felt greatly relieved. 答案：the work done With __________________________________