润色文采 完美亮卷 学案 2023届高考英语读后续写专题　

专攻解题方法与技巧 读后续写专题　润色文采　完美亮卷 读后续写多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但故事线索的逻辑性比较强。因为该题型具有一定的开放性，不仅要发挥想象力、创造性思维构思情节，注意行文通顺与连贯、过渡与衔接等，还要对文章进行润色，尝试使用高级词汇和复杂句式，运用修辞手法，以增加文章的亮点。 一、词汇 1．注意区分同义词、近义词的细微差异。 a little boy小男孩(侧重年龄小) a small boy小男孩(侧重体型小) rest room 厕所(不是休息室)What a shame! 多可惜，真遗憾！(不是真可耻) 2．恰当使用限定词 用词准确，从另一个角度来讲就是要使论述客观、适度，这就需要考生适当使用一些限定词，以避免观点的绝对化，从而提高说服力和可信度；或根据需要加以强调，增强感染力。 He is the top student in our class. →He is one of the top students in our class. He is the teacher who knows French in our school. →He is the only one of the teachers who knows French in our school. 3．使用较正式的书面语，避开口语化的表达。 This is the best hotel you can find here. You can't find a better hotel here.或Nowhere else can you find a better hotel. 二、句式 1．恰当运用连词和句型，变简单句为并列句或复合句。 Natural resources are very limited.They will be exhausted in the near future.It is not true.But it becomes a major concern around the world.This is a widely accepted fact. →It is a widely accepted fact that there is a major concern around the world for the exhaustion of limited natural resources in the near future，though it is unlikely to be true. 2．借用关键词汇(介词，不定式等)压缩句子长度，提升句子品位。 The flat has an area of 25 square metres and there is a bedroom，a bathroom，and a kitchen in it. The flat has an area of 25 square metres with a bedroom，a bathroom and a kitchen. 3．转换语态，主动变被动。 Someone saw him studying hard in his study. →He was seen studying hard in his study. 4．运用倒装，调整语序。 The scholar didn't write a single paper the whole term. →Not a single paper did the scholar write the whole term. The rain came down and the umbrellas went up. →Down came the rain and up went the umbrellas. 5．巧妙强调，增强震撼力。 He didn't realize his mistake until the whole case came to light. →It was not until the whole case came to light that he realized his mistake. You must write to me when you get there. →Do remember to write to me when you get there. 6．感叹、省略，精炼有力。 Time flies like an arrow. →How time flies! Look out for cars when you are crossing the street. →Look out for