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动作链改造公式
Part1 动作三连结构(A, B and C结构)
第一句:“男孩们跳入湖中嬉戏”
跳入湖里嬉戏 = 冲向湖边 + 脱掉衣服 + 跳入水中
The boys rushed excitedly to the lake, took off their clothes and jumped into the water.
第二句,“她抱住儿子”
抱住儿子 = 冲向前 + 蹲下 + 一把抱住
She dashed forward, knelt down and gathered her son into her arms.
第三句,“这个歌手唱歌”
歌手唱歌 = 扫视观众 + 深吸一口气 + 开始演唱
The singer glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began to sing.
Part2 非谓语结构
(1) doing A,主语+谓语B(主语+谓语A,doing B)
Looking up at the farmer, the boy said,“Thank you.”
Seeing the wolf lying on the ground, they instantly realized what had happened.
The students came in, talking and laughing.
Looking straight into my eyes, Mike stroke my hair, whispering,“You are the most beautiful g girl I've ever seen.”
Burning with anger, he glared at me with his frightening eyes, yelling,“You're such an idiot.”
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(2)Having done A...,主语+谓语B 已经....,某人.....
Having queued for 3 hours, he was told that the ticket had been sold out.
(4) done A,主语+谓语B
Deeply moved by the story, the children began to cry.
(5)done A,主语+谓语B,doing C
Encouraged by the teacher, Lucy raised her hand, whispering,“I want to have a try.”
Part3 时间状语从句
如when,while,as,before,after引导的时间状语从句
①When I arrived there, I walked to the door and knocked.
② As I waited at the stop, I heard a big noise.
Part4形容词作状语
The girl stood there, staring at the food, cold and hungry.
They sat on the beach, enjoying the sunshine, relaxed and happy.
Part5 混合结构
动作链可以和情感,环境,心理,语言等结合,形成动作面。
①Burning with anger, he glared at me with his big frightening eyes , yelling, “You’re such an idiot.”
此处的burning with anger是情感描写,glare和yell是动作链,同时将动作和语言描写结合在了一起,形成了饱满的动作面,属于高分表达。
②As night was beginning to fall, Jane saton the grass, staring at the vast sky, frightened and ravenous饥饿的.
此处将环境描写,动作描写以及情感描写结合在一起,形成了饱满的动作面。
Part6定语从句
The youngest kid wanted to get a present, but he was refused by his mother, which made him cry.
Part7 .with复合结构
Jenny walked slowly t