读后续写高效创作点拨 第三节 创作演练 讲义-2023届高三英语写作专项

第三节 创作演练 在了解“二条四点”法之后，如何合理运用是进行高效创作的关键。具体通过如下方法构思完整的实写内容 1.确定文章发展走向，并确定最终情感、最终剧情； 2.合理推测出整篇文章的情感线、剧情线； 3.由情感线和剧情线确定四点的剧情或情感； 4.选择适应情感线和剧情线发展的合理情节，构成完整语篇。 接下来以文章为例，具体讲解构思方法。 Sample Early one weekend morning, I was sleeping like a log when the telephone rang. When I answered I heard my Grandma's voice "Hey, sweetheart. I have missed you so much lately. Why don't you come to the countryside and enjoy some fine views?" she asked."Dad, Grandma is inviting us to her home,”I shouted to my father who was busy in the kitchen.“Fine with me,”he responded in a casual tone. After a quick breakfast, we drove to Grandma's. Once we arrived, we were both thrilled by the breathtaking landscape. The plum trees in the backyard were ripe with fruit, while millions of wildflowers colored the valley. Grandma prepared delicious lunch including her special homemade apple jam,which was my favorite. Seeing my greedy eyes, grandma said“Take some when you leave,and I've got plenty stored in the cellar（地窖）.”Talking and laughing， we didn't even notice that it was late in the afternoon,though somewhat cooler than it had been that morning. Grandma suggested that we take her homemade wooden boat for a tour along the nearby river. Seated in the boat,looking up at the sky,I felt like the clouds were greeting us cheerfully from above.In the vast fields, the golden trees were like brides in the sun The breeze skimmed over the surface of the field,carrying the sweet smell of the flowers. It was like a picture painted by one of the Dutch masters.“It is so nice to spend some quality time with family,”Dad murmured.“It feels like we're on an adventure,"I added."It's been so much fun!" While we were admiring the splendid setting around us,the weather started getting hot and humid again. At first, we ignored this change, but when dad looked up at the sky,he saw dark,low clouds were approaching us.Then a fierce gale（大风）sprang up.Lightning flashed within the black clouds， followed by a roar of thunder. "Row！"D