内容正文:
话题写作指导:朋友
话题分析:
本单元的话题为“朋友”,要求写关于“朋友”的短文。我们可从外貌、品质、个性、能力等方面进行写作。在写作时要注意正确使用描述性形容词,并能结合具体的事例进行合理的阐述。最后,用一两句话来表达对朋友的认识及对友谊的思考。
写作时,主要使用第三人称单数,故要注意动词的第三人称单数形式。文章条理要清晰,表达要准确。
写作实例:
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友 Jack 想结交更多的中国朋友。请用英文写封邮件,将你的男同学陈东介绍给他。内容包括:
年龄与外表
16岁; 高大健壮
兴趣与爱好
喜欢运动、阅读和听音乐;最喜欢的科目是英语
性格与为人
风趣幽默;乐于助人;容易相处
注意:
1.词数 70 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.邮件的开头和结尾部分已给出,不计入总词数;
4.文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
参考词汇:高大健壮 tall and strong
做运动 do sports
听音乐 listen to music
最喜欢的科目 favourite subject
风趣幽默 funny and humorous
乐于做某事 be ready to do sth.
相处 get on with
Dear Jack,
How is everything going? Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you.
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I'm sure you'd like to have such a person as your friend. With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
[思路点拨] :
介绍陈东与“我”的关系及其年龄与外表
one of my best friends, 16-year-old boy, tall and strong
介绍陈东的兴趣爱好 sports, reading, listening to music, favourite subject
介绍陈东的性格与为人
funny and humorous, help others, gets on well with, playing with
[经典范文]
Dear Jack,
How is everything going? Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong
to you. He is one of my best friends①. He's a 16-year-old boy and he's tall and strong. He likes sports, so he does sports every day. He also enjoy doing and listening to music②His favourite subject is English. Chen Dong is funny and humorous. He tells jokes and makes me laugh. ③ In his free time, he is ready to help others ④in need .So he gets on well with us in class. Everyone likes playing with him.
I'm sure you'd like to have such a person as your friend. With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
[教材典句]
Betty is one of my best friends.(Reading)
He tells funny jokes and always makes me laugh. (Reading)
She is also helpful②用
[亮点点评]
1 用“one