04 人与社会 社会进步(初阶课件)-【高中脑洞英语课堂】从改错视角训练词句篇微技能

第__讲 高中复习词句篇微技能 改错系列 Engage PART 1 The following passage is about changes. Let’s learn something about it. Study part2 语篇总览 2018年全国I卷 体裁 记叙文 话题 乡村的巨大变化 主题语境 人与社会-社会进步 文章大意 主要讲述了作者在去年寒假期间和父亲去乡下拜访爷爷奶奶过程中的所见所闻，由此讲述了乡下的巨大变化。 PART 1 真题 2018年全国I卷 ① During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. ② I find a change there. ③ The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. ④ Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. ⑤ They also had a small pond, which they raised fish. ⑥ My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. ⑦ I felt happily that their life had improved. ⑧ At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed. TIPS: 一删一增，8改 修改符号：^ \ —— ① During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. ② I find a change there. ③ The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. ④ Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. ⑤ They also had a small pond, which they raised fish. ⑥ My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. ⑦ I felt happily that their life had improved. ⑧ At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed. PART 1 小试牛刀 2018年全国I卷 第一步：观英文逻辑 常见：人称代词前后照应，前后意思矛盾，上下文互斥，前后语境缺乏衔接。 微技能一：理逻辑 我计划每两年回来一次，他同意了。此处是并列关系。 and there 此处表示乡下，再次去到那里。 PART 1 Let’s try. 大显身手 理逻辑 As I started to try, I didn’t know I shouldn’t handle the dough (面团) with my hands too much but I made a mess in the kitchen. (2022年安徽蚌埠三模) You actually knew there were so many mistakes in my speech and you always listened to me patiently. (2022年江西九江二模) 巩固提升 so / and 我不知道我不应该用手过多地处理面团，因此我把厨房搞得一团糟，前后是因果/并列关系。 but 你其实知道我的演讲有很多错误，但你总是耐心地听我说，前后是转折关系。 PART 1 小试牛刀 2018年全国I卷 第二