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2023 德州 英语
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高频话题写作六 人际交往
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本课时的写作话题是人际交往,包括个人感受和人际关系。其中释放压力、保持健康心理、适应集体生活、珍惜友情等是此类话题作文的常见切入点。此类作文通常与考生生活实际相关,主题有寻求建议、表达鼓励、话题讨论等。要求考生阐述和他人交往过程中遇到的问题,并且能够运用表达建议的句型来提出解决方案和理由。2013年德州中考考查如何给有烦恼的大明提建议。
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(2013·山东德州中考)下面是大明写给他的朋友Tom的信,信中描述了他的烦恼。请你以他的朋友Tom的身份,给他写一封80词左右的回信,在信中指出他的问题并给他提出建议。信的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
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Dear Tom,
My classmate, Lucy, bought a new pen. I liked it very much, so I used it without her permission. Unluckily, I broke it. Then I put it back secretly. Now she finds out the truth and is very angry with me. I don't know what to do. Can you help me?
Yours,
Daming
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Dear Daming,
I know your problem. _______________________________________
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Yours,
Tom
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【思路点拨】
1.体裁:本文要求写一封回信,是________;
2.人称:本文是Tom向大明提建议,所以以__________为主;
3.时态:介绍大明的烦恼时用一般过去时,提建议时用____________。
应用文
第二人称
一般现在时
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【导图谋篇】
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【写作指导】
开头 点出主题——我知道你的问题。
I know your problem.
正文 1.指出大明犯的错误
First, you used your classmate's pen without her permission. Second, when you broke the pen, you didn't tell her the truth.
2.提出建议
I think you should offer to pay. You can use your pocket money to buy a new pen for her.
结尾 表达愿望——我希望该建议能帮你。
I hope the advice can help you.
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【范文示例】
Dear Daming,
I know your problem. ①You've made two mistakes. First, you used your classmate's pen without her permission. Second, when you broke the pen, you didn't tell her the truth. Instead, you must tell her immediately. ②If you tell her the truth, perhaps she'll be angry with you, but at least you'll prove you are honest.
③Then I think you should offer to pay. You can use your pocket money to buy a new pen for her.