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人与动物类话题
Read for Basic Information
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Read for Basic Information
who
when
where
what
why
I, Lisa ( my wife), Bailey ( my dog) and Evan (my son)
One evening in spring
At home
My attitude towards animals (Bailey) changed.
Because Bailey killed a scorpion and saved my son.
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Read for Plots & Emotions
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Read for Plots & Emotions
I didn’ t like animals and thought all creatures were no friends of mine.
My wife, Lisa kept a dog called Bailey at home. And I still distrusted the dog.
One evening, my son grabbed the dog’s tail. The dog paused and waited patiently until being released.
When Evan was crawling, Bailey headed to him and started a fearful barking.
disgusted
distrustful
worried
afraid
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Read for Foreshadowing
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Read for Foreshadowing
Possible plot 1:
I was afraid that Bailey would charge Evan and bit him.
Possible plot 2:
After this experience, my attitude changed. I thought creatures can be my good friends. Bailey and I became good friends from then on.
Possible plot 3:
Bailey wouldn’t hurt Evan.
Foreshadowing:
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Design the Plots
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Design the Plots
Para 1: Throwing the book away, I rushed around the couch with great fear.
Para 2: Having witnessed our dog killing a scorpion (蝎子) and saving my son, I was speechless.
Q1: Why did I rushed there with great fear? What did I think at that moment?
Q3: How did the dog kill the scorpion?
Q1: How did I feel at that moment?
Q2: What did I do?
Q3: Did I changed my attitude and behaviour toward Bailey after this experience?
Q2: What made Bailey suddenly bark?
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Design the Plots
Para 1: Throwing the book away, I rushed around the couch with great fear.
Para 2: Having witnessed our dog killing a scorpion (蝎子) and saving my son, I was speechless.
我当下的所思所想(如担心Bailey要咬儿子)—— 走近时发现有一只蝎子 —— Bailey抓蝎子的过程、儿子的行为
我当下的情绪(如惊讶、羞愧、感动等)—— 我的行为反应(如拥抱Bailey) —— Bailey的反应—— 情感升华/头尾呼应式结尾
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Complete the Story
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Complete the Story —— A possible version
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