2021年6月浙江卷 读后续写 逐句翻译+句型写作课件+学案 2023届高考英语作文备考

2021年6月浙江卷 读后续写 by 陈书杏 Susan 逐句翻译 Paragraph 1: When I brought my paycheck home—it was $119—my dad wanted to talk to me. 我假装没有看到他的犹豫，直接走回了自己的房间。 (S v1 O and V2 ) I pretended not to see his hesitation and walked straight to my room. 我躺在床上，头枕着枕头，脑海里进行着激烈的思想斗争：到底给不给钱我爸呢？(doing, S vt O) Lying with my head on the pillow, I experienced an intense internal debate about whether to give my paycheck to my dad or not. 正如他说的，我已经长大了。即便如此，我仍然极其渴望把钱留为己用。(as; keep) As he said, I had grown up. Even so, I desperately wanted to keep it for myself. I was desperate to keep it for myself. 句型：S vt O 时间状语. 这种混乱的思绪一直困扰我直到晚饭时间。 This kind of confusion followed/ disturbed me until dinner time. 句型：when..., S vt O, doing... 当我走出我的房间，看到我爸时，我紧张得一直在搓着自己的双手。(rub) When I came out of my room, I looked at my dad, nervously rubbing my hands. 句型：S V1 O and V2， doing ... 他只是面带微笑，祝贺我获得第一份薪水，鼓励我去买自己想要的东西。 He just smiled and congratulated me on getting my first salary, encouraging me to buy something I wanted. Paragraph 2: I was surprised that my dad allowed me to use the money as I wished. 句型：adj, S V1 O and V2, doing ...... 我内心狂喜，冲回了自己的房间，躺在床上想要怎么花这笔钱。 Excited and overjoyed, I rushed into my room and lay in bed, thinking about how to spend the money. 句型：S vt that +宾从 突然间，我就想起了我爸从14岁就可以挣钱养家。 Suddenly, I remembered that my dad had worked to support home from the age of 14. 句型（无灵主语）：S vi as sth come to mind. 当我想到我爸粗糙的双手和他慈祥的微笑的强烈对比时，我的笑容逐渐消失。(fade away) My smile faded away as the sharp contrast between my dad's rough hands and his smile came to mind. 句型：感叹句：how adj sb be! 我感到很羞愧和不安，意识到我自己是有多么自私。 I felt ashamed and uneasy and realized how selfish I was. 我打开房门，把钱放在了桌面，我爸的眼神充满惊讶的同时，也充满了自豪。 I opened the door and put the money on the table under my dad's surprised and proud eyes. / while both surpirse and pride filled my father’s eyes. 句型：doing sth is ... 对于一个成年人来说，养家是必不可少的一步。 For a grown man, supporting his family is an essential step. $ 【2021年6月浙江卷读后续写】逐句翻译+句型总结 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 My da