内容正文:
How to polish a sentence
读后续写微技能指导5
—用语法角度去润色句子
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TOPIC
The development of the story
sad
happy
New idea
?
love
Puppy
Poppy
Parents
The boy
Sad departure
Bad mood
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Common Expression for a Happy Mood
主
系
表
状
delighted
enthusiastic
ecstatic:feeling or showing great entusiasm
enraptured:filled with great pleasure or joy
spot
note
notice
sight
observe
Poppy was happy to see the puppy.
adj.
v.
Poppy was enraptured to spot the puppy.
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1.Spotted and ultimately saved by the people in the helicopter, she felt settled.
2.Feeling unbearably desperate and hopeless, Jane knelt down, tear streaming down her face.(妻子迷失丛林)
3.A big wave came and crashed onto her, almost swallowing her.(虎鲨救人)
4.Maria began to look around the cottage thinking how to accomplish her mission successfully. (火烧茅屋传信号)
5.George and I stood there dumbfounded watching him finishing the whole job, gratitude and admiration rushing in my heart. (丛林修轮胎)
6.the audience stood up, clapping for their hero’s comeback. (滑冰)
7.David and I looked at Dad, hoping he could stop her crazy idea.
8.We sat on the grass, hooked /spellbound by the splendid nature. (健忘又可爱的老妈)
compound sentences→non-finite verbs(非谓语)
1.Poppy was fascinated by the adorable puppy.
2.She stared at him feverishly.
3.Then she bounced around with energy on the soft pads.
Fascinated by the adorable puppy, Poppy stared at him feverishly, bouncing around with energy on the soft pads.
Tip1:+doing/done
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1. With her face lighting up and arms waving desperately, she rose and shouted
2.Magically, with happy memories of their honeymoon crowding in, she regained the courage to cope with the terrible situation.
3.With tears welling up in eyes, the couple hugged tightly, promising not to lose their temper and do the silly thing again.
4.She regretted with endless anxiety, and then became asleep with shining tears in her eyes.(妻子迷失丛林)
5.Looking at their eyes with exhaustion but great concern , she could hold her tears no mor