2023届安徽省合肥市高三一模英语读后续写分析课件

2023合肥一模英语 读后续写 Plot Creating 先读P1P2首句 The next day the three men brought their instruments to the busy street corner. Will was finally admitted to hospital three months later. 读原文，划线索 collect/raise money to cover Will's heart surgery old and wrinkled;limited influence sing in sincerity; the video is unloaded to the Internet recovered; showed gratitude;meet in the gabage/street to practice/perform 定第一段结尾句 The next day the three men brought their instruments to the busy street corner. Will was finally admitted to hospital three months later. 第一段结尾句：历时近三个月,筹够足够钱. 定第一段首句 方法一：衔接原文最后一段(Money isn't an issue,”Sam said as an idea occurred to him). 解释想法： Their intention/idea is that they can encourage donations through their band performance. 定第一段首句 方法二：接心理描写 害怕、担忧、紧张： With their palms sweating and hearts pounding, they stood frozen for fear of getting cold response. They feel so stressed because it's been more than 40 years since they performed in front of a huge audience. 用原文句式 定第一段首句 方法三：接动作 竖牌，克服紧张，开始演奏： Having put up a sign “Please save Will, our fourth band member” , the three men cheered each other on and started their performance. 方法四：动作+心理 They stood in front of the passing crowd, having butterflies in their stomaches for fear of making a mess. But at the thought of the poor Will, their nervousness melted away. 推动情节发展 路人反应 (感动，掏钱）----拍视频，上传到网上-----得到更多捐款 The stirring music flowed in the air, quickly attracting many passers-by to pause, watch and appreciate. Touched by their story, many people made generous donations. One audience even shot their marvelous performance and uploaded it to the website, pushing the fundraising campaigh to a new peak. With three month's/constant/joint efforts,they finally collected enough money to cover the surgery. After that, donations from all sides came pouring in, successfully reaching $ 15000. Finally, the three men collected the money needed after adding their own savings,remitting it to Jenny together with their best wishes. 第一