内容正文:
“校园生活”
作文评析
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Contents
审题
审体裁
1.
审时态
审要点
3.
2.
审体裁
本文是一封回信
注意:要有体现回复/衔接的句子,不能直接谈生活
例如:
Since you asked me in your letter about...
审时态
第一段:一般现在时
第二段:一般现在时/一般将来时
第三段:一般将来时
审要点
生活安排:
除学习外的安排,避免罗列/流水账
学习计划:
要有具体做法,不能泛泛而谈
大学及专业:
说明专业及原因,立意要高,选择对社会有贡献的专业
背景(体现回复)
Since you asked me in your letter about...
Knowing that you are interested in...
As to/for…//With regard to…,
目的(表明意图)
I'm more than glad to
I'm writing to...
I can't wait to...
第一段:
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活动(体现劳逸结合)
1.劳逸结合
strike/keep a balance between life and relaxation
2.经常锻炼
work out/take exercise regularly
3.做讲座 address/give a lecture
听讲座 go to/attend a lecture
4.参加聚会
take part/participate/get involved in a party
第二段:校园活动
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目的及意义
1.保持精力充沛 keep me energetic and refreshed
2.丰富生活 enrich/add a new dimension to my life
3.充分生活 live/enjoy my life to the fullest
4.提高学习成绩
improve/better my academic performance
5.奠定坚实基础 build a solid foundation for future
6.缓解学习压力 reduce/relieve/release/lessen/ease/study pressure
第二段:校园活动
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第三段:学习计划
态度
1.头等大事
be high on the agenda
2.完全投入
throw oneself into study
spare no effort to do
be occupied in/be applied to
be devoted to…
3.培养积极的学习态度
develop/cultivate/foster/nurture a positive attitude to learning
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第三段:学习计划
具体做法
1.制定可行计划
work out a practical plan and stick to it
2.高效安排时间
manage/allocate time efficiently
3.提高学习效率
improve learning efficiency
4.分析优缺点
analyze my strengths and weaknesses
5.利用优势设施
make use of advantageous facilities
6.向老师同学求助
turn to/consult teachers or classmates
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第三段:学习计划
具体做法
1.制定可行计划
work out a practical plan and stick to it
2.高效安排时间
manage/allocate time efficiently
3.提高学习效率
improve learning efficiency
4.分析优缺点
analyze my strengths and weaknesses
5.利用优势设施
make use of advantageous facilities
6.向老师同学求助
turn to/consult teachers or classmates
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第三段:学习计划
选择的大学及专业
1.为了被理想大学录取
To get admitted to/gain admission