08 情感描写速记（上） -2023年新高考英语读后续写满分攻略 （PPT课件+讲义+模拟训练）

读后续写： 情感描写速记法（上） 1 Part 1：友情类故事构造“三步法” 2 第一步：友情出现危机或困难（故事冲突） 3 1、内疚 被愧疚感压得喘不过气来的Asad迅速捡起钱包，大步走向Fahad，“我在那边捡到的，我想这是你的。”Overwhelmed by guilt（充满内疚）, Asad quickly picked up the wallet and strode to Fahad, “I found it over there, and I think it is yours. ” 他低声嘟囔着，躲闪着Asad那双闪闪发光的眼睛，不知怎的，甚至不敢看他们。Murmuring in a low voice（小声地低语）, he dodged Asad’s shining eyes, somehow even not daring to look into them. 她现在什么也做不了，只能感到后悔在心里燃烧。She now could do nothing but feel the regret burning in her heart（感觉内疚在她心里燃烧）. Ariana点点头，开始感到内疚。Ariana nodded, beginning to feel guilty（开始感到内疚）. 4 2、困难与帮助 1. 不知道该怎么办，他走出教室，坐在食堂前的长凳上。Not knowing what to do（不知道该做什么) , he walked out of the classroom and sat on a bench in front of the canteen. 2.“你能为艾希礼做的最好的事就是对她仁慈和同情。”“The best thing you can do for Ashley is to treat her with kindness and sympathy（用善意和同情对待她).” 3.当Ariana 给Ashley吃午饭时，她看到Ashley眼里噙满了泪水。When Ariana gave the lunch to Ashley, she saw tears well up in Ashley’s eyes（眼泪都流出来了). 5 3、破裂 1. 因为这些人是我的朋友，我在她面前崩溃了，她道歉了，但我感到受骗了。我告诉她我决定不再继续这种友谊。我们都很想念对方，但我们都不想做最后一次尝试。Because these were the people I considered my friends. I broke down in front of her. She apologized. But I felt cheated on. I told her about my decision of not wanting to continue this friendship further（我不再继续这份友谊的决定). We both missed each other. But neither of us wanted to give the last try. 2.在旅途中我们故意避开对方。然而，当她回头的时候，我还是忍不住看了她一眼，我也感觉到她也是一样的。 During the trip, we intentionally avoided each other（有意避开彼此). However, I couldn’t help glancing at her when she turned back and I sensed the same. 6 第二步：友情弥补（解释、认错、弥补） 7 一、原谅/和好 她脸红了。我打破了沉默，再次道歉，“我不是故意伤害你的。”眼泪流了下来，她接着说道，“我应该早点跟你说。”我站起来，伸出手来拥抱她，“我也很抱歉。我应该更慷慨一些。”Blushed, she broke the silence（打破沉默), “I am sorry again. I didn’t mean to hurt you.” Tears streaming down, she continued, “I should have talked to you earlier.” I stood up and reached out to hug her（伸出手拥抱她), “I am sorry, too. I should have been more generous.” 但在内心深处我们都知道所有的争论都是为了帮助我们成长为一个更好的人，而不是敌人。But deep down, we both know all the argument is ju