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Part 1 with的复合结构句型和例句
“with复合结构” 即 “with+宾语+宾语补足语”,依附着句子而存在,起到丰富和充实句子内容的作用,因此,该结构有利于在续写中扩写句子。在读后续写中,“with复合结构” 多用作原因状语或伴随状语,使得叙述的情节更具体;同时,在细节描写上使用该结构能形象、生动地营造画面,使得表达更深刻。掌握好以下关于“with复合结构” 的句型,将有效地助力读后续写。
1.with+n+doing, 主+谓+其他
例句:With the sky turning dark gradually, Jane got lost in the forest.
(“with复合结构”在句中作原因状语, 用来推动情节,the sky与turn之间是主动关系,故用现在分词短语turning…说明 the sky。)
After a while she saw some zebra with black and white lines going beneath their stomachs.过了一会儿,她看到一些斑马肚子下面有黑白相间的条纹。
With tears welling up in my eyes, I rushed out of the flat and ran along the street.我热泪盈眶,冲出公寓,沿街跑去。
He rushed to the room with his heart beating wildly and his face flushing.他冲到房间里,心脏狂跳,脸涨得通红。
1.with+n+doing, 主+谓+其他
4. With her eyes sparkling,she struggled to her feet and shouted, "I’m here!"她的眼睛闪闪发光,挣扎着站起来,喊道:“我在这里!”
5. The horse meandered through the lonesome pines, with me(代词宾格) continuing to scan the horizon for a familiar landmark. 马在寂寞的松树间漫步,而我继续扫视地平线,寻找熟悉的地标。
6. With tears streaming down his cheek, he replied, “I did try. I really tried.”泪流满面,他回答说:“我试过了。我真的尽力了”
7. With the boy leading the way, we finally found the splendid hotel.在男孩的带领下,我们终于找到了那家豪华的旅馆。
2.With+n+done, 主+谓+其他
The rooms were full of children with lanterns fastened on oak paneled walls. 房间里满是孩子,挂满了挂在橡木镶板墙上的灯笼。(“with复合结构”在句中作伴随状语, 用来描写房间的装饰, lanterns与fasten之间是被动关系,故用过去分词短语fastened…说明lanterns。)
With all the things bought, she headed for home joyfully.买了所有的东西后,她兴高采烈地回家了。
With her fingers cut, Joe burst into tears and her legs trembled.随着她的手指被切断,乔突然哭了起来,她的腿颤抖着。
3.With+n+介词短语,主+谓+其他
例句:他用喷雾向狼喷过去,其中一只手扶着栏杆。
He fired the spray at the wolf with one hand on the bars.他用一只手扶着栅栏,朝那只狼喷了几枪。(“with复合结构”在句中作伴随状语,介词短语on the bars说明one hand的放置之处, 以此来描写人物此时谨慎的动作。)
Upon arriving at the door of his home, he was surprised to discover that a little dog was watching him curiously with the expression of shock on its face.走到家门口,他惊奇地发现一只小狗好奇地看着他,脸上露出震惊的表情。
4.With+n.+adj, 主+谓+其他
例句:他这次摔倒了,背部着地,双腿叉开。
He fell over this time,