读后续写(2021高考-山东) 课件-2023届高三英语作文复习备考

高考读后续写 2021年新高考Ⅰ卷真题讲解 Continuation Writing 读后续写: 提供一篇350词以内的材料，要求考生依据材料内容、所给段落开头语及所标关键词进行续写（150 词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。（满分25分） 01原文一致原则 内容要前后衔接，上下连贯，语言表达风格一致。 02曲折性原则 凡是故事都应有跌宕起伏，其中人物会遇到困难或问题，但最终能解决。 03正能量原则 故事内容一定要正能量，弘扬社会主义核心价值观。如迷路了但最终一定回到了家；失败了或遇到困难了，但最终一定成功了；吵架了但最后一定是言归于好，和睦相处；犯错了，最后一定会改过自新，重新做人；贼逃了，最后一定是绳之以法，等。 三大原则 Writing （续写故事） Predicting （预测发展） Reading （读取信息） Polishing （润色定稿） 细节: 动作，情感（感受），对话， 表情，独白，外貌，环境，… 过渡: then, but, therefore, however, unfortunately, obviously, in fact, to his joy, next day, … 丰富的句子结构: with复合结构, 非谓语动词“V-ing/-ed/todo”做状语，never, so等引导的倒装句,三大从句，It形式主语句，虚拟语气…. 无语法拼写错误,词汇、句型的打磨升级。 情感连贯, 符合逻辑,衔接自然,与原文融洽度高 logical+vivid+coherent+correct 写作思路与步骤 Reading（读取信息） Basic information(基本信息): who; when; where; what; why; how 第一段（逆向思维）：结合原文，由第一段首句和第二段首句推出故事情节，列出要点 第二段 :结合上文，根据第二段首句展开内容，列出要点 Tips: 1. 充分利用原文提示，回扣原文 2. 动作，情感（感受），对话， 表情，环境 3. 积极的、正能量的、温暖的 新高考卷Writing五步曲 一个主题：故事的完整性（思路不要偏，不要天马行空的想象） 两个关键：两端首句关键词 三个衔接：情节之间的衔接，情节越简单越好，推进要简洁 四个细节：动作+心理+情感+对话（环境） 五个注意：逻辑、时态、词汇、句式、书写 The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the b