内容正文:
绍兴一模读后续写(高空冒险绳索课)
Read for basic elements: who
Chelsea:
Ms. Johnson will never forget Chelsea, a wounded soul. Over the years Chelsea had always struggled, both academically and with self-confidence. Additionally, her mother had died after a heroic(英雄的,英勇的) battle with a terminal(晚期的,不治的) illness when Chelsea was a fifth grader. As she began her sixth grade, Chelsea was still hurting.
Ms. Johnson: the teacher
worried about Chelsea
instructor/chaperone/partners:encouragement; support
Where?
at Wolf Ridge, an environmental learning center
When?
sixth grade, fall(October)
Why?
The week is filled with learning, team building, and overcoming seemingly impossible challenges.
The steps and growth students make at Wolf Ridge become a metaphor Ms. Johnson uses throughout the year as her students face challenges ...
Read for basic elements
Beginning
Rising action
Climax
Falling action
(Para 1)
Ending
(Para 2)
The High Adventure Ropes Course is the most difficult activity for students, Chelsea in particular.
With the support of the chaperone and partners, Chelsea reached the first tower and moved toward the second tower.
Chelsea stepped out onto the next challenge: the Single Wire, which is also the most difficult part.
Problem
Solution
Para 3
Para 4
Para 5-1st given sentence
Read for basic elements: What
a wounded soul
why?
feared, hesitant
Read for the theme
Tip1 : focusing on the repeated words:
challenges , difficult
Tip 2: focusing on the the settlement of the problem:
The wounded soul made it to complete the High Adventure Ropes Course
Theme:
face tough and difficult challenges in life; growth
Plot Design
Paragraph 1:
Now she faced what for many is the most difficult activity: the Single Wire.
Main idea: how Chelsea complete the Single Wire.
Paragraph 2:
The final challenge is a zip line(滑索), which requires leaping off the last tower and sliding to the ground.
Main idea: how Chelsea overcame the final challenge.
Thinking: