内容正文:
2023年1月浙江省英语首考应用文分析
审题
上周末你参加了学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为 校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1. 活动过程;
2. 收获与感想。
体裁:报道
写作对象:校英文报读者
写作目的:介绍和分享校学生会在上周末举办的“认识我们身边的植物”活动
要点:活动过程,收获与感想
时态:一般过去时+一般现在时
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构思
Para 1: summay of the event
5W1H
Para 2: the process (what we did)
Para 3: comment on the event (harvest+ afterthoughts)
不需要落款!
who
when
what
why
the Student Union
last week
an activity themed/called/centered around “Getting to Know the Plants Around”was organized/launched.
使我们能更多的了解我们身边的植物
to enable us to learn more about the plants around us
激发我们对于大自然的兴趣
to stimulate our interest in nature
提升我们保护植物的意识
to raise our awareness of protecting the plants
丰富学生的校园生活
鼓励我们亲近大自然
Para 1: summay of the event
5W1H
to enrich students’ school life
to encourage us to get close to nature
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Para 1
无灵主语, 巧用witness
Last weekend witnessed an activity themed “Getting to Know the Plants Around” organized by the Student Union, which is available to all students, in order to enrich our school life and stimulate our interest in nature.
Para 2: the process (what we did)
collect the information of several familiar plants and introduce to the classmates
attend a lecture delivered by a local botanist
hold a plant identification competition.
walk around the campus to identify the plants
visit the local botanic garden to observe plants
按时间顺序或地点顺序书写
Para 2: the process (what we did)
穿插情感描写或者对活动的评价(非限制性定从,非谓语, 其他从句)
A local botanist’s lecture acted as a curtain-raiser to the activity, which made us realize in amazement that knowledge could be imparted in such an intriguing way.
Walking in the botanic garden, we were fascinated by the beauty and diversity of the plants, ranging from unique local plants to rare ones, which is a feast for the eyes.
Para 3: comment on the event (harvest+ afterthoughts)
Amazed at the abundant varieties and the great significance of those plants around us, I was totally immersed in the charm of the botany.
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