读后续写讲解（2022年广东省一模）课件-2023届高三英语写作专项

读后续写真题讲解 【2022年广东省一模】 户外遇险——父女意外落水 第二节（满分25分） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 On a Sunday afternoon, Kiana French was having fun fishing with her father and younger sister, not knowing the next minute, they would struggle not to sink in the freezing water. Their 12-foot boat was taking in water little by little, and the wind was picking up. Her father, Gary French, hurried to operate the engine, while Kiana ,16, was in the middle with Cierrah, her sister, frightened but still able to keep calm. 读后续写 1 人物1 人物2 人物2 人物3 人物3 时间 事情 人物1 Para1: 交代故事发生的人物，时间，地点，背景。 地点 Kiana asked Cierrah to take of one of her cowboy boots, with which she got some of the water out. Hard as she tried, that little effort would not help stop the boat sinking. Moments later, the unthinkable happened. The boat was full of water and then it flipped over. Kiana and her sister were dumped in the water. Their father, who had had a surgery six months ago, managed not to be thrown into the water but seemed to have great pain in the chest due to the sudden change. 读后续写 2 Para2: 船沉了。Kiana和妹妹掉水里了。 Kiana quickly put on her life jacket and saw Cierrah' s and her father' s life jackets floating away. She reacted quickly to get them back and held her sister onto the boat. They were so far out in the middle of the lake that they could not see the shore clearly. What' s worse, it was getting harder to stay above the waves. Their father swam over and hugged his two girls, Cierrah crying silently. Kiana heard her beloved sister murmur , "I can' t feel my feet. " 读后续写 3 Para3: 交代落水后的发生的事情。 Kiana knew the only thing to do was to get to shore herself and find help. She looked up at her father, exchanging a concerned glance, turned round and swam as hard as she could towards the shore. 读后续写 4 Para4: Kiana 打算独自一人游上岸求救。 Fighting against the strong currents and cold wind, she screamed for help at the top of her lungs every three minutes or so. A strong wind blew, and she looked back only to see her