读后续写语言提升 课件 2023届高考英语一轮复习

读后续写 IV 真题分析 与原文剧情融洽，逻辑且合理 (logic/coherence) 续写内容丰富有看点 (content/plot) 语法结构和词汇多样准确 (language: variety and accuracy) 语句间衔接自然，结构紧凑 (structure) 要求 解题思路 Tips: 动作描写3-5个 表情或心理2-4个 对话1-2个 环境描写1-2个 Tips: 同样的语法结构1-2； 非谓语虽好，可不能滥用哦！（避免单一的语法结构） 读懂原文情节 回扣原文，结合段首句确定情节走向 组织细节拟写草稿 丰富润色细节 环境描写 Sound 4 Smell Color the blue sky the songs of birds the thundering clouds the fragile flowers the dark, raining evening the green grass   the fragrant roses the setting/rising sun (直接/间接)情绪/心理 Dark clouds were gathering in the sky, the breeze became clod, and I felt a ripple of horror sweeping over me. I woke up to find the mist melting rapidly in the morning sun, and smelt the fragrance of roses in the garden. It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West. We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos. His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool. 5 In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don’t be late for supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a wh