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1.请根据所给情节,尝试续写一个等待和老友重逢及终于等到老友的情节。侧重人物高兴和激动的情感细节描写。(词数80左右)
She stood by the window, joyfully and patiently watching.
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1.请根据所给情节,尝试续写一个等待和老友重逢及终于等到老友的情节。侧重人物高兴和激动的情感细节描写。(词数80左右)
她站在窗边,快乐而耐心地看着。金色的阳光在她的长发上舞动,孩子们的笑声在空气中飘荡。她盯着路的尽头,希望她的好朋友能早点来。似乎她已经站在那里一个世纪了。当她看见一个熟悉的身影时,一种幸福和兴奋的情绪突然袭上她的心头。她的心高兴得跳了起来,一个灿烂的笑容照亮了她的脸。她跑向她的朋友,投入她朋友的怀抱。当他们紧紧地拥抱在一起时,喜悦/幸福/激动的泪水涌上了他们的眼眶。
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She stood by the window, joyfully and patiently watching. Golden sunlight danced in her long hair and the children's laughter floated in the air. She stared at the end of the road, hoping her close friend would come earlier. It seemed as if she had been standing there for a century. Suddenly a wave of happiness and excitement seized/ took hold of/swept over/came over her when she caught sight of a familiar figure. Her heart leaped with joy, and a shining smile lit up her face. She ran to her friend and threw herself into her friend's arms. Tears of joy/happiness/excitement welled up in their eyes as they hugged tightly together.
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2.请根据所给情节,尝试续写人物惊讶的情节。利用动作、神态和语言描写等表现人物的惊讶。(词数80左右)
John had always told him that outside the window, there was an amazing park. Mike struggled to walk to the window. Surprisingly, it faced a blank wall.
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2.请根据所给情节,尝试续写人物惊讶的情节。利用动作、神态和语言描写等表现人物的惊讶。(词数80左右)
约翰总是告诉他,在窗外,有一个很棒的公园。Mike 挣扎着走向窗户。令人惊讶的是,它面对的是一面空白的墙。迈克受到了严重的打击,就像是被一个导向正确的木槌击中头部。他用力揉眼睛,盯着我。他惊讶地张大了嘴。他在那儿呆了一会儿,睁大了眼睛,好像呆在地上。当他想到约翰每天向他描述的美丽景色时,他震惊得说不出话来。他感到困惑和惊讶,目瞪口呆地看着墙。”为什么是一堵墙?”他低声说。他难以置信地摇着头,仍然不敢相信自己的眼睛。
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John had always told him that outside the window, there was an amazing park. Mike struggled