读后续写遣词造句之动作描写语料（2）课件 2023届高考英语复习作文备考

遣词造句 二、读后续写五类描写 读后续写作为记叙文，其核心只有一个，那就是“人”。因此一切的笔墨，都是为了塑造人物形象，使人物更加饱满。很多人会觉得“主题”很重要，确实如此，毕竟每一个故事都暗含或明示一个道理。但是“讲道理”的写作方式和记叙文是相违背的，切忌把一篇记叙文写成议论文。而要想把我们的人物塑造得更饱满，就必须要有支撑他 / 她的各类描写，其中最为常见地是最为重要的描写有五类，分别是：环境、动作、心理、情绪、语言（互动）。所以我们铺陈文宇，都是有目的的，不是为了写环境而写环境，抑或是为了写“动作”而写“动作”这一切都必须围绕文章的核心人物。 第一节 动作描写 2.动作描写语料 （7）手臂 "Thanks," Dad said and put his arm around my shoulders. 翻译：“谢谢。”爸爸说着，伸手搂着我的肩膀。 He took my arm and we walked slowly to wards the cat. 翻译：他挽着我的胳膊，我们慢慢地向汽车走去。 And she opened and spread her arms out to them in welcome. 翻译：她张开双臂欢迎他们。 He clung to his grandpa tightly. 翻译：他紧紧地抱住爷爷。 （7）手臂 Bill threw himself into his parents' arms and hugged them tightly. 翻译：Bill 投入父母的怀抱，紧紧地拥抱着他们。 With eyes wide open, she dashed forward and grabbed/ gathered the cat into her arms with trembling hands. 翻译：她睁大眼晴，冲上前去，用颤抖的手把猫咪抱入怀中。 The mother turned to me, rounded me with her arms and whispered, “It is the best Christmas Day ever." 翻译：这位母亲转过身来，搂着我，低声说：“这是有史以来最好的圣诞节。 （8）肩膀 The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder. 翻译：男孩把最后一个包扛在肩上。 A gentleman at the office came up and patted Jason's shoulder. 翻译：办公室里的一位先生走过来，拍了拍Jason 的肩膀。 Within a few minutes her eyes closed. Her head dropped to her shoulders. 翻译：几分钟后她就闭上了眼睛。她的头垂到了肩上。 Swag just shrugged his shoulders, with an innocent expression on his face. 翻译：Swag 只是耸了耸肩，脸上带着无幸的表情。 （8）肩膀 A middle-aged man grabbed his shoulders and said, "Yes, it's you". 翻译：一个中年男子抓住他的肩膀说：“是的，是你。” Christine shouldered her way through the crowd. 翻译：Christine 侧身从人群中挤了过去。 Her shoulders dropped as she replaced the lid of the can. 翻译：她把桶盖放回原处；肩膀垂了下来。 Holly sat quietly in the car on the way home, her head and shoulders thrusting forward as if willing the car to move faster. 翻译：Holly 在回家的路上静静地坐在车里，她的头和肩膀向前伸，好像希望让车开得更快些。 （9）心 Mac's heart jumped. 翻译：Mac 的心猛地一跳 I felt my heart begin to pound. 翻译：我感到我的心开始怦怦直跳。 Hearing the news, my heart sank. 翻译：听到这个消息，我的心沉了下去。 I heard someone was unlocking the door, which made my heart beating wildly. 翻译：我听到有人在开门锁，这让我的心脏狂跳起来。 A 12-year-old boy saw a