读后续写遣词造句之动作描写语料（1）课件 2023届高考英语复习作文备考

遣词造句 二、读后续写五类描写 读后续写作为记叙文，其核心只有一个，那就是“人”。因此一切的笔墨，都是为了塑造人物形象，使人物更加饱满。很多人会觉得“主题”很重要，确实如此，毕竟每一个故事都暗含或明示一个道理。但是“讲道理”的写作方式和记叙文是相违背的，切忌把一篇记叙文写成议论文。而要想把我们的人物塑造得更饱满，就必须要有支撑他 / 她的各类描写，其中最为常见地是最为重要的描写有五类，分别是：环境、动作、心理、情绪、语言（互动）。所以我们铺陈文宇，都是有目的的，不是为了写环境而写环境，抑或是为了写“动作”而写“动作”这一切都必须围绕文章的核心人物。 第一节 动作描写 （1）头 ①她抬起头，看到母亲熟悉的面庞。 She raised her head and saw the familiar face of her mother. ②“是的,她弱弱地说道并低下了头。” “Yes, she said weakly and hung/ drooped / lowered her head.” ③Mei Mei 低下了头，长长的头发遮住了她的脸。 Mei Mei ducked her head down so her long hair covered her face. ④贝贝被父亲责备的时候，他的脑袋耷拉了下来。 Bei Bei's head drooped when he was scolded by his father. 2.动作描写语料 （1）头 ⑤George 立马点头并抓住彩票吻了吻。 George nodded promptly and seized the lottery ticket and kissed it. ⑥Tom 挠了挠头，不知道该说什么。 Tom scratched his head, at a loss what to say. ⑦他把头倚靠在书桌上，盯着远处的山。 He rested his head on the desk, staring at the mountain in the distance. （2）脸 ①看到这只小狗，她的脸上统出笑靥。 When she saw the little dog, her face lit up. ②看到她兴奋的笑容时，Pappy 的脸似乎泛着红晕。 Pappy's face seemed to glow as he saw her smiling with excitement. ③他奔向母亲的怀抱，脸上洋溢着幸福的笑容。 He ran into his mother's arms, his face beaming with happiness. ④小女孩的脸上统出一个灿烂的笑容。 A bright smile spread across the little girl's face. （2）脸 ⑤她尴尬得满脸通红。 Her face flushed/ burned with embarrassment. ⑥发现房间一团糟，他妈妈气得脸色铁青。 Finding the room in a mess, his mother was blue in the face. ⑦听到这个消息，他面色变得惨白。 When he heard the news, his face turned pale. ⑧别对我做鬼脸了！ Don't make a face at me! （3）脸颊 ①她的脸颊上闪烁着泪滴。 Her cheeks were shining with tears. ②这位女士拥抱了 Tim 并亲吻了他的脸颊。 The lady hugged Tim and kissed him on both cheeks. ③她的脸颊被黑暗中的火焰照亮了。 Her cheeks were illumined by the fire under the dark. ④感激的眼泪顺着脸颊淌下，Prather 紧紧地抱住了 Gilleece。 With tears of gratitude rolling down his cheeks, Prather hugged Gilleece tightly. （4）眼睛 Look（侧重看的动作） eye 细看 stare 盯着 gaze 凝视 glance 扫视 glare 怒视 watch 观看 observe 观察 scan 细看 See（侧重看的结果） find 发现 notice 注意到 discover 发现 spot 目睹 catch sight of 看见 get a glimpse of 瞥见 （4）眼睛 Then her eyes lit up with excitement