06 Unit 3 Healthy Lifestyle 建议信写作（问题-分析原因-解决）-2022-2023学年高中英语教学必备资料（上外版2020必修第三册）

应用文写作 建议信（健康问题） problem-solution pattern 建议信 一、通常包括3部分内容： 1. 写作背景和目的； 2. 具体的建议和合理的方法或原因； 3. 希望被采纳或希望现状变好。 （建议信是向别人提出合理性的建议，以便使对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题，因此要求建议信要写得简明扼要，目的明确，理由充足，具有合理性和说服力。） 建议信 二、重点： 1. 掌握写建议信的常用句型，知道如何分配文章架构； 2. 注意表达建议的时候语气要客气委婉，例如可以使用一般疑问句，如Could you …? 建议信 三、注意： 1. 分析写作要求，写作对象和写作内容； 2. 组织文章架构和分段内容； 3. 注意文章的语气，不能过于强硬； 4. 注意要提出可行性、逻辑性较强的建议。 该写作属于应用文类的书信，故要用第一人称来写。信的主题是建议。建议信是作者对某些问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法、忠告或者改进意见，从而解决问题的一种写作文体。为了实际目的，你所提出建议理由要入情入理，可行，易让对方接受，建议信的语气要和善，要与对方拉近距离而不是盛气凌人，语气一定要礼貌当先。 开头：提出问题的常用表达方式 1. I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble doing...at the moment. 2. I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to... 3. It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on… 4. Knowing that you have trouble doing…, I’m writing to give you some suggestions to deal with it. 正文：分析问题的原因 1.The reasons can be listed as follows. For one thing…For another… 2.Perhaps the main/primary/most important reason is… 3.This problem may result from/ be largely due to/... 4.What has contributed to this problem? In the first place… In the second place… 结尾：提出建议 1.When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you should do… 2.I’d like to suggest/advise that … should do… 3.You’d better do/not do... 4.I think it would be more beneficial if you could… 5. By doing this... 6.Only in this way can you... 7.You may/might as well do.... 表达祝愿或期待： 1.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions helpful/useful/practical./I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you. 2.Personally，it would be beneficial if you stick to... 3.I will be happy if you can take my advice/ideas into consideration. Three parts Heading: state your idea,topic… Body Ending: give a conclusion, restate your opinion. Point1… Point2… reasons & evidence General structure 1： Knowing that you are deeply concerned about…, I’m writing to give you some useful suggestions. Maybe the most likely cause of...is ... As for it, here are my detailed suggestions. Firs