读后续写微情节句式仿写课件 2023届高考英语作文备考

授课时间:2月8日 授课教师:蒋阳 教学目标: 读后续写素材积累:梳理模块化“微情节”,模仿常见情节的句式。 读后续写练习 第一节 微情节之“激化矛盾” 1. 愈演愈烈微情节构建: 环境 心理 动作 不断恶化 即将崩溃 不知所措 可搭配句型:随着情况的恶化,某人快要崩渍了,完全不知道该怎么办。 As/ With +恶化的情况,sb. was on the edge of breaking down, totally at a loss what to do. 例1 “北极熊”【2020·澌江卷】前文情节:我和妻子Elli拿北极熊期间,北极熊袭击了我们的营地。我们使尽各种办法都不奏效,最后我朝它脸上喷了辣椒水,北极熊吼叫着跑去湖边洗脸Paragraph 1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp.几分钟后,熊回到了营地。 微情节构建: 环境 心理 动作 北极熊继续攻击营地 我们的心理即将崩溃 我们不知所措 当那只熊第二次试图用它巨大的爪子(massive paws)推倒(tear down)栅栏(fence)时,我们几乎崩溃了,完全不知所措。 当那只熊第二次试图用它巨大的爪子(massive paws)推倒(tear down)栅栏(fence)时,我们几乎崩溃了,完全不知所措。 as”版本: As the bear was trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws for the second time, we were on the edge of breaking down,totally at a loss what to do. “with” 版本:With the bear trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws for the second time, we were on the edge of breaking down, totally at a loss what to do. As/ With +恶化的情况,sb. was on the edge of breaking down, totally at a loss what to do. 例2 “荒野求生”【2016·浙江卷】前文情节:Jane和丈夫出去玩,但是他俩在路上吵架了,Jane一气之下自己先走了,结果迷失在了丛林中。飞过来的直升机被树木遮挡了,使她错过了获救机会,她想找一个空旷的地方求救。Paragraph 1: But no more helicopter came and it was getting dark again.但是再也没有直升机飞来,天又渐渐黑了。 微情节构建: 环境 心理 动作 马上要天黑了 Jane 的心理即将崩溃 Jane 不知所措 随着夜幕笼罩森林,Jane快要崩溃了,完全不知道该怎么办。 随着夜幕笼罩森林,Jane快要崩溃了,完全不知道该怎么办。 as”版本:As the night swept the forest, Jane was on the edge of breaking down, totally at loss what to do. “with”版本:With the night sweeping the forest, Jane was on the edge of breaking down, totally at a loss what to do. As/ With +恶化的情况,sb. was on the edge of breaking down, totally at a loss what to do. 2.希望渐微 微情节构建: 动作 结果 已经使出浑身解数 情况没有好转 可搭配句型:(1)尽管某人已经绝望地……了,……(情况没有好转)。 Despite sb.'s desperate (doing) sth., …. Desperately though/ as sb. Had done sth,... (2)尽管某人已经使出了浑身解数,……(情况没有好转)。 Every possible trick though/as sb. had attempted,... Despite every possible trick sb. had attempted,... 例1“海上遇险”【2020·山东省泰安市高二上学期期末】前文情节:我们一家去海滩玩,我不会游泳,就去划一条小渔船,突然海浪袭来……Paragraph 1: My boat was pulled towards the d